Reviews for With Love
CSG chapter 1 . 8/10
Some times people can't see what's right in front of them. Nicely done. Thank you for writing it! :)
tawelephant chapter 1 . 8/10
I want to junk punch him, but I still liked it. :)
ForeverRobsessed chapter 1 . 8/10
I wish there was more of a build up before Edward's confession... Few more steps, so that it didn't sound... Well, a little too dramatic.
Anyway, other than that, I really enjoyed the story, and your writing style is lovely.
thanks :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
How conveniant that he now loves Bella. I wonder though, if Kate had been a young gorgeous girl, would he have said he loved Bella? Nope, he would have dumped Bella for Kate in a heartbeat.
shaz308 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
A great one shot. So sad for Kate but glad it made Edward see what was right In front of him and he almost lost.
LizziePaige chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
I did like this, a lot. But I don't believe in Edward's love at all I'm afraid, I don't think he would be true and loyal to Belka if something (he believes) better comes along. Great writing, thanks for sharing :)
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Great story! Even though it was frustrating at times I love the journey they took to their HEA.
Faeraei chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
How shallow is Edward... He doesn't deserve Bella. Basically his premise for saying I love you is out of some wrongly-placed pity? I hope Bella is more vindicated in your other story! She's be like a doormat if she wasn't.
frostedglaze chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
great one-shot, though I didn't care for the ending. What if Kate had been a young attractive woman? He would have left Bella. Actually he already did. After having sex with her, he left to find Kate. What's worse, is that he didn't tell Bella where he went, when he rushed back to her side to claim his love for her.

He was basically waiting to see if Kate was an upgrade. If Bella had known where he went, I think this would have ended differently, and Edward would have wound up alone.
twilightlover4ever123 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I loved it:) except I keep wondering if he would have come tithe conclusion that he loved bella if Kate had been young and what he expected
ellaward chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I don't know what to think,...

Okay i can see that it took Edward a while before he realized that he loved Bella all along,

but he should realize and be made aware that he hurt Bella a great deal by shutting her down and still continuing his search of his dream woman while sleeping with her!

I wonder,... if kate was a young girl? what would have happened?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Whatever. I really wish to believe Edward loves Bella but no, I can't. It's dissapoinment because I live for HEA and I don't see it here.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
really loved this, although the ending didn't really leave me feeling good. It kind of felt like bella still wasn't his first choice since he did keep going back to find kate. It was as if he chose her because kate didn't turn out to be who he thought.
Anton M chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
It was lovely!
linalove chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Aw! So cute! Loved it!

xxx Lina
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