|Reviews for Anchor of the Soul|
| wolfgirl667 chapter 13 . 3/14
this story is so adorable i need more
| RedRoses5 chapter 1 . 3/12
I love it. I love it. I love it. Really great work.
In a previous review, a reviewer commented on the 'shaking his head' and 'nodding his head' thing. I'll have to admit that's been bothering me too, but not to the point where I would stop reading or anything like that. That's the only thing that's bothering me, otherwise no complaints. You've got an amazing story here.
Update soon! :)
| demi-wolf3T chapter 13 . 3/12
Please update really love this story
| Elm Treigh chapter 13 . 3/7
I don't really have much to complain about your story. It's been a joy to read! :)
I will say a few things, however:
There are moments where certain words in sentences used are incorrect. Where they should end with an -Ed rather than an -s or -es. For example, 'she leads to such-n-such' when it should be just lead. No -s necessary. Where it should be headed, etc. I'm not sure I'm explaining that right. I wish I took an excerpt from your story to better explain but unfortunately I'm on my phone with little to no internet access & it makes it difficult. Maybe next time, when my connection is better I can show you. If you'd like & don't mind, of course.
The other thing I must point out is the one thing that confused & annoyed me the most. When you write 'she/he shook her head...' See, generally 'shook his/her head' is used to describe a negative. As in to say 'no'. 'He/she shook his head' to me meant no, disagreed, or clearing the mind of thoughts. In most cases, you're using it to describe a yes, an agreement. In which case, you should instead say 'he/she nodded'. Using 'shook his/her head' only to describe that the gesture meant agreeing to what was said or done negates the gesture & the description. If it weren't for the sentences afterward (or sometimes before) I'd have to believe you meant the person was upset, angry, or denying/refusing what's said or done. Again, I'm not sure I'm explaining myself correctly & I wish I had better connection to explain but this will have to do for now.
One last thing. In one of your Author's Note, you mentioned a review stating that having one chapter as a one shot was unprofessional & you refuted it was your story & this was a site for fan written stories; no story is meant to be professional. I have to agree with you completely! I, on the other hand, really enjoyed the one shot. Especially since it was placed perfectly. Had the one shot been placed, say, a couple of chapters ago, it'd make no sense & then that review would have been valid. But if placed correctly, like you did, it works. I encourage more chapters as one shots. I liked it very much.
Anyway, I really your story, & I look forward to reading more. :)
| hellohaha chapter 13 . 3/2
Omg that was perfect! Keep updating!
| pogocrazy7 chapter 13 . 3/2
when are they going to get together?! im going crazy waiting for them to get together.
| Jessiscrazy9108 chapter 13 . 2/28
OMG I can see her brother or dad storming in and flipping out haha any way you write it will be awesome. Update soon please!
| on-tuesdays-i-wear-purple chapter 13 . 2/28
Oh my gosh i am in love with your story, stiles and maxi are just the cutest things ever! Your writing is brill! Keep going! I need more chapters!
| poorxbrokexcollegexkid chapter 13 . 2/27
Sorry it's been so long, school is killing me. Great chapter, the ending was adorable!
| Rose chapter 13 . 2/24
Aww,Poor Max! glad Stiles was there to make her feel safe again.
| SimplyKelly chapter 13 . 2/24
I've probably missed the 150 mark, but I can still review. I loved this chapter and i'm glad that not only did the boys finally decide to "allow" Maxi to help out, but that she herself got a little more information about the crap going on in Beacon Hills. I look forward to when she finally learns everything, till then I can grin about her growing closeness with Stiles. Can't wait for chapter fourteen. I know I've probably said this before, but I can't help myself, I love this story.
| niamheternal chapter 13 . 2/22
That was so cute at the end 3
| khalisha.c.bronxean chapter 13 . 2/22
I finally made an account, lol this is khalisha (guest) by the way. And another amazing chapter by the way! ️ I always look forwards towards you update! I seriously was scream dancing for 5 minutes lol. But I live this book, and cave wait to see what happens next.
| YelloSubmarine93 chapter 13 . 2/22
URGHHHHHHHHH. There's just so much Maxiles and I LOVE IT and protective Stiles is my most favourite thing ever and cuddling and comforting and MAXILES CUTENESS. And then the added girlfriends protectiveness and comforting with Maxi and Lydia was so cute. I love it!
| Charlie-Charlie-Charlie chapter 13 . 2/22
Naww! I love Maxiles so very much! And the end of this chapter was adorable and I wish Maxi was part of the actual show! I genuinely wish I could watch all of the episodes with her in. Maxi is such a wholesome and realistic character I just love her and enjoy reading anything to do with her! Looking forward to the next chapter, as always!