Reviews for Writers' Collective Witfit Challenge
xoHunnyxBunnyxo chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Poor Edward indeed
jennayg123 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I seriously crack up at his reactions every time. Great writing there! Loved this one!
mamacat20 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
This poor guy. I feel so bad. There is going to be a lot more to shock him. At least Bella has the patience to help him get through it.
mamacat20 chapter 8 . 10/22/2013
Poor Edward. Too bad there isn't such a thing as a mind meld so that they can just give him all the info he needs.
debslmac chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Loving this. He has so much to learn
boo1414 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Oh my! LOL
Melolabel chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Baaa haaa haaa. Yes, you're courting a woman in trade, fair Edward. At least she's not a ho. :D
DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I LOVE this Edward! Too bad our time will jade his beautiful innocence. I'm sure he will maintain the important things. I don't think the essence of a true gentleman can change.
Can't wait to see him in the bedroom! Yippee! He's already swoony...I may have to get out the smelling salts for those lemons! LMAO!
Can't wait for the next chap!
xoxoxo
susanpr chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I am so loving this. Poor Edward ;)
sujari6 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
The shocks keep coming for Edward.
pnkats chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Yes poor Edward. That would be a hard adjustment
KristineM chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
So much to learn and catch up on Edward! I love all his reactions to everything!
shaqbarcalis chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
he he he love it so funny
twiclare chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
It's just one shock after another for the poor man!
crystalight22 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I love how he sees everything and just says that's not right. I feel that way about rap and how people think it's ok to speak that way
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