Reviews for Question of Loyalty
Fluffcicle chapter 16 . 7/31
Ehhhhhhhh! You can't stop now! It's getting reeaaaallll good! Spy Sanji is awesome! I read your Impel Down story and it is my most favorite Fanfic ever! Have the Strawhats met Vivi yet? Will Sanji drop his phone?! Will Zoro ever get his chicken!? See these are legit questions rolling around through our heads you can't stop now! Keep Going! Don't torture the poor readers with an unfinished good story!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/15
You have to finish this pleaseeee
Guest chapter 16 . 7/10
You gonna update any of your fics, or...
Kellygirl6754 chapter 16 . 7/5
Is there no more? Could you please continue, I thought it was done so I read it. Only to find out it wasn't so could you do us all a favor and finish. It'd really be a shame to let such a good story become a WIP
orangeaddiction chapter 12 . 6/24
Wow the fight scene was a lot like watching one from the anime. It was very realistic! The part where luffy shouts to nami gave me chills…I love how you incorporated bits of the arlong park arc into this. The only thing that confused me was that luffy and arlong were suddenly inside the building at the last bit of the fight scene…cause I thought they were still fighting outside and it just seemed kind of sudden without a little bit of description or something before sanji told zoro that luffy was inside the building. That part where sanji gave zoro back his sword and zoro thanking him was really nice. I wonder if zoro knew what sanji was thinking about….that zoro will leave if he gives him back the sword… but he gave it back to him anyways which was really sweet of him. XD Luffy saying that loving someone isn’t weak and sanji realizing that and gaining confidence back in his doubts about the baratie was great too. I also love how you have sanji spying and doing mr prince stuff in this. There aren’t many fics that portray this side of sanji so this is excellent! Oh and I forgot to mention before that I love how you write sanji caring a lot about his reputation for the ladies…and his inner dialogue are done really well...like him believing that hes too good looking to go to jail. XD
orangeaddiction chapter 8 . 6/22
You make the most interesting conversations for zoro and sanji. XD I really like the part where sanji mends zoro’s haramaki. I’ve never thought of it till now but sanji prob does have to mend his own clothes quite a lot. Zoro washing the dishes cause of sanji’s injury is too sweet and thoughtful. I didn’t even realize that until sanji thought of it. XD I really like how you write smoker. Hes intimidating. I wonder if he knows that sanji was trying to get information from him. Ohoh now the rain hotel and ! I’m always so amazed when canon references fit in so well.
orangeaddiction chapter 5 . 6/20
I love this fic so much! I really like the slow development of the plot and how detailed the scenes are. I especially like the way you write the narration…I’m not sure how to explain it but it feels very realistic… like I can picture the scenes very clearly and hear the character’s thoughts or dialogue in their voices. I love how you referenced canon events like the riceballs and sanji answering crocodile’s call. I particularly love the rice ball scene in canon so I’m so happy you incorporated it into the plot. The scene with Rika is adorable I almost died from her cute-ness. XD Sanji with the stray cats are sooo sweet my gosh. That was the scene that drew me in along with the rich imagery. Him feeding the cats totally shows sanji’s nurturing characteristic which is perfect. Sanji’s relationship with zeff and the guys at the baratie are so nice too..I love their interactions. And finally zoro being suspicious and not wanting to owe sanji anything is spot on and so like his character. I like how playful your zoro and sanji can be even though they just met…they’re so cute. XD oh and smoker police stripper was so crack. XD
Guest chapter 8 . 5/25
I really hope you finish this sometime. I honestly enjoy this fic so much
Annoyed chapter 16 . 3/26
You said this was off hiatus and that you'd be updating regularly. Then where the hell's the next update? I could say the same to the rest of your abandoned fics. Come on already, jesus christ...
kiddy.t.wolf chapter 16 . 2/19
Ooooooooooooohhhhhhh! That cliff hanger! XD seriously can't wait for more!
K.B.Maillet chapter 16 . 1/28
Now I'm not a shipper of...anything (unless its for pure comedic purposes like LuffyxMeat), but the way you wrote this story...simply amazing. You've done a wonderful blend of AU and Canon, the characters seem completely legit in personality, I couldn't stop reading this for its intensity and heart-warming scenes. The comedy is fantastic and the parts were tension is built made me squeal with delight.

The only thing that disappoints me is that you haven't updated since April 3rd (10 days before my 20th birthday too). I know you probably have things going on for you (I've been in that boat many times) but I would absolutely love to see this story continued and have some kind of closure.

Keep up the good writing,
K.B. Maillet
C chapter 6 . 12/30/2014
LOL! "...Like a phone sex porn star. Not that he'd found the voice attractive or anything."

The paragraph started on such a tense, anxious note, that it took me THREE READS TO NOTICE THAT LINE. OHMYGOD. YOU ARE AMAZING.
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 16 . 11/30/2014
-shrieks and flails arms- SANJISANJISANJISANJI GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE! He'll probably have to wait for them to leave before he can get to safety, and at least ROBIN knows where he is. Does Crocodile? Maybe the dust in the ventilation shaft was sand from his Sand Sand Fruit (the original term escapes me at the moment). But Crocodile is a cocky bastard who probably doesn't even think of the possibility of someone finding out about him.

I'm hoping you pick this back up soon, because this is AWESOME. I'm not much of a ZoSan shipper, but I thought I'd give this a try, and I am NOT disappointed. I love this so much, their playful bickering and fighting and I just adore it so much!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
Awww! I absolutely LOVE your story 3 please continue updating and please update soon. I wanna read more about Zoro and Sanji :D
guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Please update soon!
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