Reviews for Question of Loyalty
Annoyed chapter 16 . 3/26
You said this was off hiatus and that you'd be updating regularly. Then where the hell's the next update? I could say the same to the rest of your abandoned fics. Come on already, jesus christ...
kiddy.t.wolf chapter 16 . 2/19
Ooooooooooooohhhhhhh! That cliff hanger! XD seriously can't wait for more!
K.B.Maillet chapter 16 . 1/28
Now I'm not a shipper of...anything (unless its for pure comedic purposes like LuffyxMeat), but the way you wrote this story...simply amazing. You've done a wonderful blend of AU and Canon, the characters seem completely legit in personality, I couldn't stop reading this for its intensity and heart-warming scenes. The comedy is fantastic and the parts were tension is built made me squeal with delight.

The only thing that disappoints me is that you haven't updated since April 3rd (10 days before my 20th birthday too). I know you probably have things going on for you (I've been in that boat many times) but I would absolutely love to see this story continued and have some kind of closure.

Keep up the good writing,
K.B. Maillet
C chapter 6 . 12/30/2014
LOL! "...Like a phone sex porn star. Not that he'd found the voice attractive or anything."

The paragraph started on such a tense, anxious note, that it took me THREE READS TO NOTICE THAT LINE. OHMYGOD. YOU ARE AMAZING.
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 16 . 11/30/2014
-shrieks and flails arms- SANJISANJISANJISANJI GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE! He'll probably have to wait for them to leave before he can get to safety, and at least ROBIN knows where he is. Does Crocodile? Maybe the dust in the ventilation shaft was sand from his Sand Sand Fruit (the original term escapes me at the moment). But Crocodile is a cocky bastard who probably doesn't even think of the possibility of someone finding out about him.

I'm hoping you pick this back up soon, because this is AWESOME. I'm not much of a ZoSan shipper, but I thought I'd give this a try, and I am NOT disappointed. I love this so much, their playful bickering and fighting and I just adore it so much!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/20/2014
Awww! I absolutely LOVE your story 3 please continue updating and please update soon. I wanna read more about Zoro and Sanji :D
guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Please update soon!
filipalope88 chapter 16 . 9/29/2014
Another chapter please
Guest chapter 16 . 9/21/2014
I knew there wasn't only 16 chapters to this story... I finished it it one day because it's so fricking good ! Zoro and sanji are such dorks and the plot is so interesting I wanna know what happens next! When will you update this ... Please update :(
BlackRoseVixen05 chapter 16 . 8/10/2014
Well, I am officially caught up. I have really, really enjoyed this entire fic thus far and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work! Tomorrow I start Tumblr Fame _
BlackRoseVixen05 chapter 12 . 8/10/2014
Ah, well, only got to read one chapter today.. but it was very awesome . Perfect amount of action. Not too mcuh, and just enough to keep things interesting and the story rolling along. Really great. Can't wait to continue again tomorrow night :3
Musicmegamaniac chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Yay! It pleases me that you added characters from different episodes and arcs in the story. Keeps it interesting.
Musicmegamaniac chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Love the story so far. And you did an excellent job on portraying all the characters from the baratie, even in modern times. Just a normal daily routine of the baratie. Especially Sanji, it wasn't hard to imagine the scene with the inspector. How dare he do that to the beloved restaurant? I hope that Zeff doesn't lose it for everyones sake. Cant wait to read on.
BlackRoseVixen05 chapter 11 . 8/9/2014
Ah, excellent chapter. You're very good at writing action scenes! I also love how your stories flow so perfectly with the original canon. Very, very awesome. Can't wait to resume again tomorrow. The plot doth thicken!
BlackRoseVixen05 chapter 7 . 8/8/2014
Ah! It's been forever since I last visited good ol' . Haven't had much time for reading OR writing since work picked up... but the one good thing about being sick at home with a viral chest infection is you get to catch up on your reading! I'm enjoying this fic very much.

I've just read seven chapters in one night! I want to keep going, but my eyes are shutting down xDD I fully intend to resume tomorrow, though. Can't wait to see where things go from here! My favorite part of this particular chapter was Sanji returning home to find Zoro working out (successfully!) in the living room. That was priceless.

Keep up the good work! :D
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