|Reviews for Veil Of Obscurity|
| KaiBlueOtaku chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
This was SO good, Cho. The comfort here is deep, passing through so many levels throughout the story. I feel so peaceful after this, and well-rested, thank you. You've done a masterful job on this one, I will surely read this again when I'm in need of the deep comfort of my soul. The serenity of this surpasses my ability to describe it. Yes, the lemon was hot, but it was the comfort that came through so vibrantly in this one to me. The quiet in the woods, covered in the first heavy snow still drifting lazily from a dark sky, moonlight cascading over everything as the snow muffles all sound, numbs all pain... All wrapped in a warm blanket and a lover's soft, accepting arms. Deep sigh... That was this. Thank you.
| KaiBlueOtaku chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Well, here are three very different selves than I am accustomed to reading... Mugetsu, maybe not so much, but the other two, I'll have to wait it out and see about them. Shame on Kisuke, doping Ichigo! But his intentions were good enough, I suppose. This has a lot of promise! I'm interested to see where it goes, as well as glad that I'm not having to wait for an update on chapter 2!
| QT05 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
Wow! That was just AWESOME! ...hot, hot, hot, Hot, HOt, HOT!
This was by far the BEST foursome I have ever read. Solid plot with an extremely intense lemon scene; the best kind of story. It all just fit so perfectly. Wow!
Usually the types of threesomes and foursomes I've come across are just pwp, which just ruin it for me because a GOOD lemon scene must have a good plot. A plot is like that special ingredient that makes an average recipe taste amazing and something to be remembered and praised. Praise is exactly what you deserve with this piece. Just amazing work.*applause* You should pat yourself on the back. Fantastic job. Adding to favorites! Will definitely be rereading this masterpiece frequently.
Awesome work! Keep it up!
I hope to see another foursome or threesome in the (hopefully) near future.
*two thumbs up*
This definitely made my weekend! :)
| Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
Oh. My. God! Wow! Damn that was HOT! I don't think I can sleep now lol... shit! Are you TRYING to kill me?! Oooh man oh man oh man oh man... my mind is completely blown! Oi Cho what the fuck? You ARE going to continue this right? Cause siriusly you know you should continue this... I wanna know what happens with Urahara and his dad. Does Ichi baby get his powers back? Oooh this gave me another idea!
G'night sugar cube, im out for the count.
| mist shadow chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
Still not seeing how it will work out, too much maneuvering needed to make it work. But what the hell, I enjoyed it
Wonder what kind of punishment he will think up for Urahara though. If he will at all
| mist shadow chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Moron. Combination of a surprisingly bitter drink and words "I might have smth for your insomnia problems", yeah, I would've gotten suspicious. Though maybe it's the lack of sleep, that prevented him from thinking clearly and making the connection
Heh, it's all good and all. I worry about when he wakes up. Teenagers can create angst from truly strange things after all
| Seishin19 chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
This is one of the best yaoi fics I've read so far! And here I thought I was the only one that likes Ichigo self-cest... *blushes*
I love all your fics... Keep going!
| Kyouko Hori chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
;; omfg I felt reading this chapter! I love it! Tge way it was detailed and how Ichiho felt made me feel like he did! I love it!
| Rai Spirit chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
Awesome chapter! I really liked it! :D :)
| Kyouko Hori chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
OMFG! THAT IS SO EROTIC! DX FOURSOME! OMG! SO AWESOME!
| phoenixreal chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
Beautifully done. Such emotional impact!
| phoenixreal chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
damn cliffhanger. need an update soon or i'll die
| KayentaKheals chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
You write so well, I had to stop and look at your profile for your age. I'm impressed with how well you already write and look forward to watching you continue to grow. Thank you for distinctly different stories from everyone else, its a nice treat.
| Rai Spirit chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Awesome story so far, love it already, can't wait to read more! :D :)