|Reviews for Not Forever, For Always|
| Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
| Loves to read books chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I actually like your title. ;). Keep up the good work.
| Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
I like it a lot . really nice story.
| UniquelyMi chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Beautiful. The color and emotion stood out so well in all of it. I especially loved the description of Corus and the blunt "He hated it more than he can remember hating anything before". I think an even blunter "Tobe hated it", followed by "He hated it more than anything before" would have been better with more of an impact. Tobe's runaway scene was really well done too, with his impulsive move and shame very clear. Nice job!
For title, Maybe "Kel's Boy" or "Wild One".
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
I thought this was great. Tobe is so cute, and I actually thought the whole thing worked really well with the two of them.