Reviews for Becoming family
the accidental horcrux chapter 3 . 8/19/2017
my earlier review was meant for this chapter,, i think
the accidental horcrux chapter 1 . 8/19/2017
shiiit i meant that dean was one year, seven months older so he'd be seventeen, and sam would be thirteen
the accidental horcrux chapter 1 . 8/19/2017
,,,, you got the dates wrong a little bit... dean was born in january of '79 which makes him just about seven months older than Harry. He would be 16, and sam would be 12,,,, plus "a donation made twenty-two years ago" would make harry potter 22 years old.,,,, but anyway
Roserayrose chapter 5 . 7/16/2016
Reviewing for Ch:5, It's Lily with one L, not two . (sorry, I have a peeve about that)
readpink chapter 2 . 3/18/2016
Someone forgot about Adam,... AGAIN. XD
Psyka chapter 12 . 4/25/2015
Guest chapter 12 . 1/18/2015
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Dontforgettologout.lessontime chapter 2 . 1/9/2015
I noticed a mistake, you forgot poor Adam, there should be three other dark red lines besides Harry's connected under John Winchester's name: Dean's, Sam's and ADAM'S (please fix this (perhaps Adam can be saved))!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/19/2014
Ok first:I didn't like this story, your Harry character doesn't feel right !

Second:I did like that had a boyfriend but it was sad that he die later !

And final: The characters from the other story didn't feel right too !

Any way now am done nagging you
Paxloria chapter 9 . 1/27/2014
There's some stuff left ot in the part Harry first meets the vampires.
StormQueen6711 chapter 12 . 1/12/2014
gonna go read it now :D
domsijohn chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
Make war not love. war is fun chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
cool story
Nichole Monroe chapter 11 . 1/2/2014
When is the next one coming up?
RinRin-Chama chapter 11 . 1/1/2014
Eagerly awaiting future chapters! Also, I ADORE the cedricxharry thing, LOVE your story so far!
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