Reviews for The Story of a Line
Rex the Memelord chapter 2 . 6/26/2014
and time to review this myself, I thought I did pretty good in this(and this was my first story) I did the characters well(*sarcasm*well that's certaintly a shock :O) I would finish this but I have no idea how to go on from now
1908765436789064 chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
:D is there a little romance between the blues I see! *- he he. And the fighting was awesome. I laughed at the sum wrestler part. Lol
Girl of Darkness10 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Nice, but you need capitals and periods. I'll be happy to beta for you if you need one. :)
1908765436789064 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
*sits down* This was good. It was a little messy, ur sentences need to go a little bit smoother. But other than that, I'm interested. Wooh! *throws confetti in the air* Bring on more chaptahs!