|Reviews for someday|
| BrodusDarth chapter 2 . 10/15/2013
I like the story line so far. Just don't give up. The more you write the better you will become.
| AlianAnn chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Heyyyyyyy I found your profile :3 i should probably upload my own work as soon as I find it. It's sort of lost at the moment.
| TORIXJADE chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Nice story so far. Keep on going. Though I would suggest a little more detail, but other than that you've got a great start to the story. I hope you keep on writing. You did a fantastic job :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Nonononono you have to carry on! :D
| badeforever640 chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Your doing a good job so far you should continue :-)
| ScottyBgood chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
Story seems okay to me. The best thing to do to improve is to keep writing and get feedback, so you're on the right track there.