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   BrodusDarth chapter 2 . 10/15/2013 I like the story line so far. Just don't give up. The more you write the better you will become. |
| AlianAnn chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 Heyyyyyyy I found your profile :3 i should probably upload my own work as soon as I find it. It's sort of lost at the moment. |
| TORIXJADE chapter 1 . 9/30/2013 Nice story so far. Keep on going. Though I would suggest a little more detail, but other than that you've got a great start to the story. I hope you keep on writing. You did a fantastic job :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2013 Nonononono you have to carry on! :D |
| badeforever640 chapter 2 . 9/27/2013 Your doing a good job so far you should continue :-) |
| ScottyBgood chapter 2 . 9/26/2013 Story seems okay to me. The best thing to do to improve is to keep writing and get feedback, so you're on the right track there. |