Reviews for If I Never Knew You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Just read all of the chapters️ and I want moreeee! Love the way it is written, so far one of the best fanfics I’ve read. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah another chapter! This story is so good! |
![]() ![]() D hope you continue this story, I really like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite chapter so far! So well written! |
![]() ![]() Kinda confusing but still awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE! love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Punzie. :( B Flynn was sexy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed that, except in Rapunzel's POV, you use third person. This is fine, but you're specifying whose POV it is, you need to use first person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah...that gave me chills. What is Flynn up to? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Flynn all mysterious so cool! Jack is a good friend soooo cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE! AMAZING STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Eugene not knowing Rapunzel? That sucks. Not your story though. Your story is well written and consistent. 7/10 Now, about this Jack fellow. -raises rocket launcher- NOTHING BUT EUGENZEL FOR ME! -fires rocket at him- |
![]() ![]() Um...no offense but the way it's written seems like you're making this up as you go. Sorry but the story line in the summary is more interesting but the story itself is very confusing upon character background and MAJOr OOC. The flow is just very hard to follow, the idea of the story line is good it just needs ALOT of work with plot. |
![]() ![]() Ok this confused me...unless I missed something...is this supposed to be repunzel and Flynn? Or is this an odd crossover? |