Reviews for The Merging
ScarfedWriter chapter 5 . 2/11
Okay so, two things, one from this chapter and another from the prior one.

From the prior one, wasn't Harry more adept to duelling and such? How'd it ended up with a clash of hexes where both parties, Harry and Draco, got hit? At least for me, it's kinda confusing. Liked the scene tho.

Second, why wasn't Umbridge's blatant accusation of murder against a traumatised 15/16 years old, in front of his whole class by a figure of authority, taken into account on her meet with the principal? Now that seems quite wrong.

Still loving this a whole lot!
Oghenevwogaga chapter 30 . 1/10
Well done!
adiutusdominus chapter 12 . 12/7/2024
really fucking Severus garbage Snape. as a teacher and of ocllumancy. I mean cannon is one thing but here
HelpmeHermione chapter 28 . 12/7/2024
I really enjoyed this story! I felt immersed. I'm glad you didn't rush it. I liked Nym the most.
Excited Fan chapter 8 . 12/2/2024
Ohhhh if this ends up being like the Hero/Darkrai situation in the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Spirit romhack, I'm gonna be so happy. I had a lot of fun witn that story and this one looks super fun in its own way too!
Proxygalaxy2.0 chapter 27 . 12/3/2024
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Animeworld2.0 chapter 8 . 11/27/2024
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Athtar chapter 30 . 11/24/2024
Amazing
Beautifully Written
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LordHadesinTartarus chapter 10 . 11/23/2024
So I don't understand why Harry would still have any connection to Voldemort or his horcruxes. The whole dementor's kiss situation in the beginning would seem to negate Harry being a horcrux himself any longer, and that was the connection between him and Voldemort.
Guest chapter 30 . 11/17/2024
Nice but way too slow how slow like waiting for the 50th Christmas from the beginning if celebrating it
gigamans57 chapter 30 . 11/18/2024
"expect something new within the new week or so" He lies so brazenly...

Also just adding my two cents, I did not like the Tonks romance and I also do not like the Tracey one to be honest. Every romance or romance adjacent plot in this from the weird Daphne stuff (whatever went on there) to however Hermione feels about him just felt odd. Honestly by the end I was hoping he'd hook up with Narcissa because I genuinely liked her more than any other female character in this.

Everything else in the story is honestly top notch, the romance just missed for me. Kinda felt like he tried with Daphne and just ricocheted into Tracey?..
torchy22 chapter 24 . 11/17/2024
cause I am thinking plot I am screaming "merge Stella to Harry" but everyone isn't thinking of it cause they have to get there normally. unless of course you have other plans cause this is a finished story that I am reading.
Omega Rasengan chapter 30 . 11/17/2024
Anazing story, had a great time reading it and I’m glad I did read it. Only thing that would have made it better was if harry/tonks happened or harry/hermione, but thats just me.

Great story and cant wait for more of your other stories like your naruto one or a new harry potter story.
torchy22 chapter 17 . 11/15/2024
this is my favorite chaptera bright light for Harry and should be integral to story versus what if... leading to choices impacted by this excursion
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2024
If Adventure/Romance is an apt description, then identifying up front who is party to the romance would be appreciated by some.
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