|Reviews for The Merging|
| DeadFish37 chapter 30 . 20m
Excellent story. I love how you can feel Harry get darker over time.
| DeadFish37 chapter 17 . 22h
This was fun. Great idea, though whether it would be better as a separate oneshot is something you should consider, given how much it distracts from this universe's plot.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 29 . 11/29
Good story! Lots of imagination.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 24 . 11/28
Well, I'd imagine becoming master of the Hallows might extend his life...
| HelpmeHermione chapter 15 . 11/24
I love how Harry stood up for Luna. Made me warm and fuzzy. Shame on Ravenclaw!
| HelpmeHermione chapter 10 . 11/24
I thought the mind connection was closed now that the Horcrux in Harry's head is gone? Phantom connection?
| PrettyFlackoPink chapter 25 . 11/24
with each chapter i long for the end more.
Muggles would win easily, An Imperius wont help you shit against a sniper rifle fired from a km away. Make that 7 Bilion guns.
| PrettyFlackoPink chapter 23 . 11/24
this story looked like one of the best ive read... and then it did a 180 and is very quickly loosing me, with weird character decision (tonks, harry etc) and stupid new things that just read like its being pulled out of nowhere. I mean the president ? rly ? I just skip trough dialog at this point to see if Harry ever is gonna do something more with a Girl than fuck her, ghost her afterwads and turn her into a fucking death eater.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 7 . 11/24
Inviting the snakes. Very progressive and intelligent of him. They can educate him to the ways of the elite wizard ing world.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 6 . 11/24
I gotta say, I love that Harry is spending time with Luna. I feel like you really capture everyone's character very well. I've been non stop reading up to this point. Should sleep. Hearing about Harry's extremely productive days makes me feel lazy.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 3 . 11/24
Hmmm, could it be the locket? It would make sense Ginny would feel on edge around it as well.
| HelpmeHermione chapter 2 . 11/24
So obviously Dumbledore realizes Voldermort's mini me only got kissed so he doesn't mind spending more time with him, hence the prefect badge. That was also a minor thing he resented him for. I liked the wand selecting process. I have read another fanfic recently that had Harry get a basilisk cored wand. Different wood though...mahogany? Odd it wouldn't just eat though the wood, but that's magic for ya. Kind of a tease not having him actually TALK to the snakes, so we don't know if he lost the parselmouth abilities. Glad Harry is starting at an even playing field. It will make him work harder. Tonks is badass and will always be one of my favorites!
| HelpmeHermione chapter 1 . 11/23
I really like the insight of the action to have Harry go outside the moment Vernon looks like he's gonna beat him. Brilliant! In the dozens and dozens of fanfics with the abusive Dursleys in them, I have not yet seen anyone write such an obvious thing to do. Almost a little too clever, like you had to go through something like that and that's why it occurred to you. Which leads me to wonder if empowered Harry stories are written as a reflection on one's self and feeling powerless growing up. Or craving power to strike back perhaps. Just musing. Of course it could be argued that it would be worse for him when he does go back in. Slippery!
| ProditorMagnus chapter 17 . 11/23
I appreciate that you allowed this chapter.
| ForSer chapter 15 . 11/15
Harry throws a tantrum again, destroys school property and goes unpunished. This is because some people steal things from his little friend. Couldn't he stop it with his prefect privileges and punish only those who deserved it? Why is he perfect with this attitude? Why didn't the teachers stop him? Looks like we got another cliché story in which Harry is a smartass and everyone else is just submissive pushovers.
The AK plot twist could have made things more interesting, but in the end we are still walking the canon.