|Reviews for The Merging|
| Guest chapter 16 . 1m ago
You made a mistake when editing. Lily's letter references James giving girl advice to Harry, but James' letter doesn't contain that advice.
| Guest chapter 11 . 1h ago
I want Stealth!Harry to become a fanfiction staple. Not only in the silly sense, but even in more dramatic situations.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2h ago
Keep these exponents exponentiating baby! I liked this chapter much better than the last couple.
| Guest chapter 4 . 3h ago
The quotes at the beginnings of chapters don't add anything to the story and are jarring.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4h ago
Thanks for the disclaimers at the bottom. I would have read even more eagerly if they'd been at the top... Nonetheless I'm mostly just glad you don't intend to fall into fanfiction's common pitfalls.
| flakeshake07 chapter 17 . 3/11
Just want to say amazing fic!:p so much character development and interesting twists! Looking forward to your next chapter
| BlueCaesar chapter 16 . 3/11
LMAO! I love your style! Gryffindor's unofficial motto: Screw it, just do it. Much better than Nike's!
| So you want to be an Author chapter 17 . 3/9
Loved the chater, love the story!
Hogwarts gaining a body isn't completely original but still a good move. I'm a little put off by the fact that you let some plot threads slip into oblivion some times, like Harry doing runes, or his relationship with Salazar, or what is Amelia Bones doing with the info he shared...
Oh, and you keep using profesy for prophesy instead of prophecy and advise where it should be advice (advise does exist, but its a verb, not a noun)
Anyway, eager for more!
| 30CK chapter 11 . 3/9
I have to say, this chapter is one of the most fun chapters of any Potter fic I've read (that isn't strictly a comedy crack fic). I've been meaning to review it like this for a while, but I've only ever read it through the FFN app on my phone instead of a proper computer where I prefer to review. Anyway, yes. So much fun. I love this fic for its great characterizations like this far more than any plot it holds (which, so far, is somewhat standard, no offense meant), and I look forward to every update.
| Aeonir chapter 17 . 3/5
Started reading this a few days ago, and I have to thank you for "cleaning" up the first few chapters as they hooked me in a way I'm sure thry wouldn't have if they'd been their original versions.
I really feel that you've captured the feeling of the Harry Potter setting and characters to an extent few manage, and with no bashing and overly stupid character designs (like an Evil overlord Dumbdore, or Snape killing children in his free time etc) this is certainly a breath of fresh air beyond being a great, engaging, well written story. Your characterization and character interactions though are your biggest merit in my opinion. So thank you for an incredibly enjoyable read, and I'll be looking forward to future updates.
| chris7100 chapter 6 . 3/3
This is a really interesting and well written story. I'm thoroughly enjoying it. That said, I'm having trouble with everyone's complacency regarding this magic inhibiting potion. Harry's experience when taking the potion each morning, that numbed or truncated feeling, is why so many people with mental illnesses go off their meds. Why is Harry, who is emancipated!, continuing to tolerate it?
| mbahgila21 chapter 17 . 3/3
hmmmmm... is Harry destroyed the propechy after he watch it?
i love Daphne... but actually i hope Harry will pair up with Ginny... (or if you can, Harry with both of them...with Harry is Head of two House...Potter and Peverell...please...)
update soon... :D
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 3/3
Interesting thing to do with the wand, I'd have powderised(?) it, then incorporated it into the Core of the new wand. A Wand Squared. Would be interesting at any rate.
| kildar2010 chapter 17 . 3/2
wow just wow, that was an awesome Story, i can't wait for the next chapter.
i do have a question though, is harry going to absorb the other Horcruxs? you mentioned that he feels a 'pulling' sensation and that was the best idea that i had.
Anyway 10/10, a truly awesome fic
| Sandaime Hokage chapter 17 . 3/1
A really great fic, really enjoying the read and interested in where you go next