Why is this at the end, and not when it took place chronologically? A mighty strange ending to a mighty good story, if you catch my drift.

So after all of this Harry will let Snape mind-rape him. Chapter 12 and Im still waiting for him to actually stand up for himself. In one chapter Harry have anger issues, but when its about Dumbledore he is calm as cucumber.

I'm not normally one to review, and I've no idea if you'll ever see this, but I'd love to see another fic branching off from here, because I loved this chapter

Shit

Thought you were fuckin ded
Thanks for not telling us you didn't get isekai'd, damn
Good on you finishing the thing though, it's a goodun

The relationships are becoming increasingly annoying. Harry is already involved with Tonka. Why are you having multiple other girls starting to try and gain his attention? Unless of course this is a harem, in which case I hope that becomes obvious soon so I can stop reading.

I can't even quantify in words how wonderful this was to read, such a great world and a harry that was amazing to follow along with. Every character was amazing but Dumbledore, narcissa, Tracy and harry where such fascinating people with wonderful points of view. I hope you have other fics for me to read I'm going to check now.

Well calling it quits here. What some garbage lol.

Awesome story, though I wish we got a explanation on what the flames actually did to heal Harry. Thanks for the good read

It's really unfortunate that reviews cannot be edited. Just wanted to add, I absolutely loved the portrayal of the relationship between Harry and Narcissa, as well as its conclusion. The plot overall is simply fantastic. Also, I very much enjoyed your writing style, especially the characters' inner monologues.

This was a beautiful, amazing story. The personalities you've given everyone are fantastic. Thank you very much for sharing this story.

just a quick tip. roughly speaking/general-rule-of-thumb:

poison is something that you've ingested. Venom is something that one might be attacked with by flora/fauna.

Great story with a lot of fun ideas and characters. It kept me hooked all the way through so it really was a joy to read.

The ending did feel a bit rushed though, with the students timeskip coming out of nowhere and Harry suddenly being in a relationship with Tracey instead of Tonks despite everything, and quite a few questions about Merlin and Stella still unanswered. So I hope the "sequel" chapters can give it all and proper closure. Looking forward to it either way.

There will be no epilogue about the life of Harry and Nym? Were they happy? Have they kids? Harry turn to be Mod? He was the fractured figurine? And in that case what it means?

Words ca t even describe how much love this amazing plot amazing characterization all around amazing only thing that sucks is that we didnt get to see more harry and Tracey interaction or harry and tonks but I'm hoping to see more of both soon thanks for this amazing work and I cant wait to see what you do next

Fuck, that bit at the end is mind-blowing lmao