|Reviews for The Merging|
| HIUIRCXNJMKN chapter 9 . 3/15
Oh, this chapter was a punch straight to the gut.
| sonofthechaos chapter 29 . 3/10
An amazing work of art definitely one of my favourites Harry Potter FanFictions
| Georg chapter 22 . 2/22
Up to this chapter I have read with great pleasure. But to hell with it all, if the usual delirium begins with self-sacrifice, moral and emotional torment and distrust of the closest people "out of the best of intentions."
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 23 . 2/21
introducing merlin and doing everything you did with him rings hollow, the direction you went with magic never really caught my attention most of your choices for it just result in a sigh and saying really.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 20 . 2/21
The problem I have with this so far is one souls merging can't happen so harry absorbing the souls really shouldn't work at all but your making it work which is meh. Two your treating magic like it's some container in the body that can over flow and be filled up, it's not a power that comes from within but flows through you. Absorbing another soul piece shouldn't do anything in that department to begin with.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 19 . 2/21
Honestly the idea that touching a horcrux causes harry legitimate pain makes no sense, even then a demenotrs kiss wouldn't merge harrys soul with the soul fragment and it makes even less sense for harry to now once again feel pain from horcruxs that for the most part don't actually do anything.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 6 . 2/20
honestly harrys random bouts of anger are getting a little weird
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 2 . 2/20
you can't use a liquid core. The part of a basilisk that can be used for wands is the fang and nothing else. Even then basilisks aren't naturally occurring beats in the sense that they are actually made which is why they are nearly extinct, so honestly unless Dumbledore sold the basilisk at hogwarts then he shouldn't have any parts. Seriously though it's always better to familiarize yourself with the actual lore then operate on fanfiction tropes.
| Dzarsos chapter 30 . 2/9
You know, I don't think any other story on this site has ever had me as anxious as this one did... I've been engrossed in stories before, but this one actually had me tense waiting for a resolution. Really well done - now I need to digest it.
| Purple the Orange chapter 1 . 1/24
I've read this story multiple times. Its currently my favourite HP fanfic. The characters feel real in their flaws and their strengths, the fight scenes are well described but also add to the greater story. Its everything I could ask for in a fanfic. Highly reccommend to any new readers checking it out!
| Rabenkater chapter 7 . 1/20
this is my 3rd read through and chapter 7 is one of my favorites. Maybe of all fanfics I'd read so far.
| True Ouroboros chapter 1 . 1/10
an amazing story, you've done very well with this
| WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 30 . 1/8
Another good look into this side story. After reading the a/n about the process for this chapter, I would agree that Harry in this story would only want this one thing. Fits your Harry perfectly. Well done and thanks for sharing!
| Ducky1776 chapter 17 . 1/7
I really liked this outtake! It had to be very disconcerting to the universe Harry dropped into.
| WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 17 . 1/7
After initially skipping this to continue with the story, I'm glad I came back to read this chapter after finishing the story. I know you scraped it from the overall story, but it's an interesting side story. Even answered a question about the home in Godric's Hollow that I had put aside without much thought, so thanks for that. It would have been interesting to see how this might have affected him if this stayed in, but reading this after the rest of the story I can see where you pulled in some of the results into the main story even if just a little. Well done again, and thanks for sharing!