Aha! I knew it was strange that Nagini was the first Horcrux to be destroyed!

We are approaching the end of this story, it seems. A big fight is coming, I feel like it's going to be intense, with all sorts of things I didn't see coming and maybe some I did.
The feeling of Harry's perspective is growing darker and darker too.

Well, that was a violent end for a chapter!
What do you need where you're in a dead end surrounded? Snakes, lot of them (I actually found that funny)

Wow, the pace really increased in the last 2 chapters, or at least I feel like it has.
I have a few theories on how he could ''add weight'' to his soul, but I'll see later if I was right

Ok, I didn't see this twist with Tonks coming...
I don't know how you plan to do it later in the story, but if he discover she's alive after moving on or if she die just after that, it's gonna be a bitter moment...

What? Seriously why is it that every good fan fic that had any build up starts going off the deep end? Someone dose you with LSD?

Niceee work

I guess for HP ideas what if Voldemort tried to manipulate the prophecy from the beginning? Like he kills Harry's parents and then fakes his own death to manipulate the Wizarding world and Harry from the shadows all Dark Lord style.

The little extra at the end of the chapter made me laugh and is cute too, nce one x)

I don't believe the two societies could live together. I think our scientists would want to study them and our governments would want to use them as fighters.

The story is definitely getting exciting! I can't wait to read how Harry destroys Draco and I am wondering if he's going to survive the confrontation with Voldemort.

Big sigh...I honestly wish Flamel could be the president of the U.S., lol! Having someone around that could correctly interpret everything in the Constitution and other old documents could definitely be helpful. Not that it would really matter though as there would still be intense conflicting opinions.

I believe the Flamels are wrong and that Harry won't die. If I really thought he would, I wouldn't want to keep reading this story.

Oh, I definitely have always felt that Dumbledore wanted to become MoD so he could bring Ariana back. But I also have never felt it should actually happen.

I kind of laughed at your 'Merlin' as he seemed extremely narcissistic, lol! Not at all like any Merlin I have ever read in other stories. Tbh, I think it's great you went your own way with that character. It's definitely distinctly individual and makes one more reason for this story to stand out.

So...I am guessing that the First Lady must be a rather talented healer?

Idk about this fic. It wasn’t bad but wasn’t good either.

In the books, Amelia was killed off. I hope that doesn't happen in this story.

I loved everything about the trip to Azkaban...even Harry's reaction to it. It shows that despite having more and more of Voldemort's soul in him, he's still a good person.

Or does he? I mean, if he isn't just absorbing Voldemort's soul, then I am having trouble understanding what IS actually happening.

As much as I adore Luna, I don't really like Harry/Luna stories either. To me, their relationship is more of a protective big brother/doting little sister type and romantic just doesn't fit. But I also don't like stories that over exaggerate Luna's quirky qualities. I much prefer a more balanced Luna too.