Reviews for The Merging
Nobels chapter 23 . 9/25/2016
So, I just read through all available chapters so far, and I it. I'm really excited to see how the merging with the horcruxes, the fight against Voldemort, and Harry's relation to the Slytherin girls play out!
himalay1729 chapter 23 . 9/25/2016
More please..
himalay1729 chapter 22 . 9/25/2016
Good good.
himalay1729 chapter 21 . 9/25/2016
New Ha.
himalay1729 chapter 20 . 9/24/2016
Good good.. .
anon chapter 18 . 9/24/2016
Still absolutely brilliant; you're an outstanding writer. If I had one serious criticism to make, it would be this: you often simply abandon an interesting event without exploring its emotional consequences for the characters. Examples would be Harry's sexual encounter with Tonks, Harry's argument with Daphne in April, the revelation about Stella, etc. These are major, emotionally-charged events for everyone involved, but the chapters following them just plow forward as if they never happened. If they get mentioned again at all, it's sort of in-passing and with a narrative shrug.

The overall effect is a little disorienting. However, the story is otherwise so well-told and the characters so fully-fleshed and engaging, that it barely matters. It's still easily one of the best stories on this site. Keep up the fantastic work, and thank you for the time you devote to this story.
himalay1729 chapter 19 . 9/24/2016
Nicely going . .
himalay1729 chapter 18 . 9/24/2016
Quote the raven nevermore.
himalay1729 chapter 17 . 9/24/2016
Quite good going.
himalay1729 chapter 13 . 9/24/2016
Awesome...
himalay1729 chapter 11 . 9/24/2016
Good going.
himalay1729 chapter 10 . 9/24/2016
Wow.
himalay1729 chapter 5 . 9/24/2016
Going Nicei
himalay1729 chapter 4 . 9/24/2016
Awesome
himalay1729 chapter 3 . 9/24/2016
Good going
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