|Reviews for The Merging|
| Drae chapter 20 . 1/30/2022
oh m harry usurped a mother! from draco malfoy! what a legend
| Drae chapter 15 . 1/30/2022
the harry&luna is fun because he’s compassionate, wealthy with grew-up-poor sensibility, and kind of takes people as they are? emotional hypervigilance. and he has an adrenaline addiction. so someone who’s chill, has a useful strategy to deal with outside opinion, and would be raring to go adventuring and ensure his life was never boring by just. existing and continuing to question? romantic or platonic, it’s a great match.
| Itack23 chapter 5 . 1/25/2022
I just love Luna so much as a character, so adorable
| Rayga chapter 21 . 1/23/2022
Snape starting Defense class was just brilliant and one of the best Snapes Ive seen here :D
| Itack23 chapter 4 . 1/23/2022
I don't know why, but the way you made Harry encounter every female character at the start of the chapter, one after another, really made me think of the start of a dating game where the MC encounter every potential love interest xD
Tonks, the Head Girl (Heidi), Alicia, Daphne, Luna, Cho... Hermione and Ginny don't seem to count, considering how he interact with them
| Itack23 chapter 3 . 1/23/2022
Thos pet snakes lmao x)
I feel like, in this fic, Umbridge will have a very hard end, when the time comes
| Itack23 chapter 1 . 1/22/2022
Well, nothing really new for the moment, but well writen anyway and I read good comments on this fic so I'll give it a try :)
| WeLonelyOldSouls chapter 30 . 1/15/2022
This was amazing. One of the best corruption arcs I've ever seen. A radical and stark exploration of the human spirit and the lengths we go through for love. The emotions you evoked- I'm in awe. This is one of the few fanfics I've read that felt real, felt true. Like I didn't have to pretend or forget things to enjoy. Had I read this a month ago, easily top five for 2021. It's too early to call for 2022, but a very strong contender. I'm- I will happily read more of this or your other works.
| Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 12/20/2021
Clothes? Why not buy the snakes himself? Is the Fat One taking them as pets or login ingredients?
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 12/20/2021
How come nobody gets him some decent clothing?
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 12/20/2021
I agree with Newcomb about Harry. It's also one of the reasons potioned Harry works so well. He marries Ginny and Hermione marries Ron.
| Shayberri789 chapter 30 . 12/16/2021
Hey! I loved this story!
I know it hasn't been that long since you posted chapter 30, but I was wondering if you'd written those side stories you mentioned in the A/N, or if you'd be hyperlinking them (if thats even possible, Idk how works lol) when they were written. Thank you!
| AerynS chapter 30 . 12/14/2021
I believe that this is the first time I've ever read a story like this. It's left me feeling a bit off-kilter. I'm not quite certain that I liked it because it left me uncomfortable.
I respect your right to craft as you please. I have to say it made me think.
Poor Harry! Just can't catch a frickin' break.
Thanks for sharing...
| Mr chapter 8 . 12/8/2021
I really don't understand what you're trying to portray Harry to be anything short of complelety insane/bonkers . Even if he had partial sanity or rationality , he would not make his first trip to chambers after killing basilisk with a girl who he had talked to only twice at most ,that too after seeing her on a date with Malfoy (regardless of her whatever her reason be).
| DeadFish37 chapter 30 . 12/2/2021
Excellent story. I love how you can feel Harry get darker over time.