Reviews for The Merging
Defiant7 chapter 18 . 11/10/2021
fantastic job, If I am going to hate on it I need to be able to love on it to. 10/10 would read this chapter again
Defiant7 chapter 11 . 11/10/2021
it's so frustrating. you set it up where Harry's all like "rage, I hate people not respecting other people, never let it happen again" example being Hermione and the discriminate term from draco but then doing nothing when Ron does the same thing or when it happens to Luna multiple times. There are some great one liners in here and his emotions outbreak on the 4 snakes back after the first hogsmead visit but it's like how many times does he need to be walked on before doing something? and now fucking Dumbledore Dumbledore Dumbledore! you've spent the last 10 chapters saying that you don't trust him but now rushing to him the first wind in the air instead of series black, the man you built up as his 'guardian'!? in 5 more chapters I'll probably read about him taking torture from umbridge and finding some way to defend her actions since that's and stop reading all together in disappointment. Fantastic writing (Grammer, sentence structure, flow) but it is cannon that's not true to how he's portrayed through this lens
Defiant7 chapter 1 . 11/9/2021
where is his backbone? Annoying to keep reading oh do this, yes sir! Sorry you all treated me like dirt, can I clean your house? Going to bed disappointed
Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 9 . 11/7/2021
I feel that moments like Harry’s outburst this chapter serve to make him more human in the eyes of the reader, like he’s not just a character from a book you read about or an actor playing the part in a movie.
Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 8 . 11/7/2021
Does the spell ‘Presto Magic Tuna Spell’ summon a magical tuna or does it give you a can of tuna?
Myralie chapter 30 . 11/6/2021
Hi! I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this fanfic. I feel like all of the characters are closer to cannon than in most other fanfics(for instance Dumbledore isn’t some selfish old dude off his rocker and Malfoy isn’t suddenly ok with muggleborns and is in love with Harry), yet everything’s different you know? I don’t know how to properly describe it, but I just love everything about this fic from the plot to your writing style. Like honestly, this fine piece of literature is so much better than many books I have had to read for school. Anyways, this is probably tied for my favorite fanfiction of all time now. The only other story (or series I should say) that even comes close is the Rigel Black Chronicles by murkybluematter. It’s very well written just like this one, but it’s one of those stories where Harry is an entirely different person to begin with (Harry’s a girl, into potions, and her family is alive). But with this story you took Harry as he was and slowly and realistically molded him into something entirely different by the end. I’ll be looking forward to that actual ch 30 on Morgan!
Fuck Names chapter 22 . 10/30/2021
Tonks is way more competent here then in canon or in any other fics but her actions are needless and illogical. Nowhere has it been shown she feels so strongly for Harry as you have portrayed this chapter. Quite out of character and frankly, unnecessary.
Fuck Names chapter 20 . 10/29/2021
Wow, loved the Narcissa arc. Most unnecessary yet still the best in this story, topped only by Harry's arc.
Fuck Names chapter 1 . 10/28/2021
Me from the future, if you come across this again, don't read this, you've already read it. Don't make the same mistake a 3rd time smh. Trust the past you, future me.
SpSt chapter 17 . 10/27/2021
this is such an interesting side chapter.
hga chapter 29 . 10/26/2021
You're right, this is one of the better HP fics on the site, or any other site that I've come across. A good portrayal of a maturing Harry, a story that while it has the usual Tom and Harry and Horcruxes canon was wonderfully unpredictable and kept my interest from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing it with us!
deschiffchiff chapter 30 . 10/21/2021
Thank you for a wonderful story !
Guest chapter 15 . 10/13/2021
Harry feeling better than ever after that can't be good.
Loresign chapter 15 . 10/11/2021
Read “Help of a Seer”. It has the best Luna I’ve ever seen. Awesome story as well.

Most people write that Luna was holding her mother as she died. This kind of shock when left untreated would explain how she is. Also her father is not all there either. Poor girl never really had much a chance. The few times Harry and Luna are written together, she seems to start as typical Luna and slowly gets better. Luna mainly needs someone to see past Loony and just see Luna. Normally Harry is good for this roll.
PiBrain chapter 15 . 10/7/2021
Why is Harry such a bastard? I like him for all of two seconds before he goes and treats girls like objects. His rant about Malfoy doing that very thing is all well and good, except now he's constantly turning around and switching his focus from one girl to another without regard for their feelings. It makes no sense in terms of the character you seem to be attempting to set up.
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