Reviews for The Merging |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was incredibly well done. His anger is expressed in a visceral way that makes your point without it being an over the top tantrum. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Open the office had me actually laughing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nym huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blink. Well that is a very normal boy thing to draw |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the realism of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suck at reviews. But I try to leave something when deserved. Interesting start and really good at drawing me in. |
![]() ![]() So literally nothing has changed with Harry lol I thought he would be smarter or whatever but he isn’t he is just normal Harry at this time |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Fk With this book |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would you say "Don't even bother your brain with this one."? Fantasy stories are intended to be enjoyed under the suspension of disbelief. Writing unique things is how you make your story your own. Basically, own your own writing; don't be illogically embarrassed by it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, fun times. Umbridge getting her dues for once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just waiting for Nym and Harry to kiss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think my favorite part of this story are the interesting quotes at the beginning of the chapters. still the story itself is great as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Broody temperamental emo |