Reviews for The Merging
kase519 chapter 9 . 5/20/2021
That was incredibly well done. His anger is expressed in a visceral way that makes your point without it being an over the top tantrum.
kase519 chapter 8 . 5/20/2021
Open the office had me actually laughing
kase519 chapter 7 . 5/20/2021
Very nice
kase519 chapter 6 . 5/20/2021
Nym huh?
kase519 chapter 5 . 5/20/2021
Blink. Well that is a very normal boy thing to draw
kase519 chapter 4 . 5/20/2021
Another great chapter
kase519 chapter 3 . 5/20/2021
I really like the realism of this story
kase519 chapter 1 . 5/20/2021
I suck at reviews. But I try to leave something when deserved. Interesting start and really good at drawing me in.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/18/2021
So literally nothing has changed with Harry lol I thought he would be smarter or whatever but he isn’t he is just normal Harry at this time
DekuGwap chapter 6 . 5/15/2021
I Fk With this book
9149130189189 chapter 8 . 5/13/2021
Why would you say "Don't even bother your brain with this one."? Fantasy stories are intended to be enjoyed under the suspension of disbelief. Writing unique things is how you make your story your own.

Basically, own your own writing; don't be illogically embarrassed by it.
9149130189189 chapter 4 . 5/13/2021
Ooh, fun times. Umbridge getting her dues for once.
9149130189189 chapter 3 . 5/13/2021
I'm just waiting for Nym and Harry to kiss.
Sanders7201 chapter 13 . 5/13/2021
i think my favorite part of this story are the interesting quotes at the beginning of the chapters. still the story itself is great as well.
ArchmagePeverell chapter 9 . 5/13/2021
So Broody temperamental emo
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