Reviews for The Merging
Lord worth chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
i have a question how will he train like aurors if he performs magic like first year?
coldblue chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Great story/chapter.

I loved the idea of the Dementors and Harry changing attitude/training/wands.

I hope Harry is above average in the Occulumency to block against Voldemort who is a Master at Legilimency. Who knows? Maybe Voldemort could push Harry to become better at Occulumency than most people. Maybe.

I kind a hope that Harry does study some dark/grey magic like Legilimency for interrogation purposes and control "Fiend Frye" to add a powerful Dark spell to his set to destroy other Horcrux's with that spell.

I can't wait to see where pairing is going. It possible it could be Harry/girl/girl in this fic or so. Just not too much or at least develop Harry with some girl. I don't care for OC female characters.

Keep up the good work.
Bored-sama chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
shadowkat678 chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Yay Tonks, ya, I already read all three but forgot to review because I was so caught up, so I'm reviewing all three chapters one after another (THEY ARE ALL FANTASIC)

I LOVE Sirius, Remus, and Tonks! Those are some of my fav's along with Hermione and Snape (I know, Snape, but I just always go for the sad backstories! I'm a sucker for those things, hook, line, and sinker!)

Can't wait to hear back, btw, I will start betaing this before you say yes just because
A) I'm board
B) It's just fun to do!
shadowkat678 chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
okay, just realized you updated three chapters, in like, two days! Wow!

also, some stuff I forgot to mention in last review: I love the long chapters, love the little bits of humor thrown in, and love the A/N's as I'm weird and just like to read those things

also, about that beta thing, I am also a great idea bouncer and am checking my mail about every hour or so if I'm not in school and sometimes even there if there is Wi-Fi (I'm addicted to fanfic, can you tell?)

And I love how you refer to them as cannon sharks, I've dealt with a few of them myself!
LittleFaeChild chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Awesome! :D
Loved it!

Is it a Harry/Tonks pairing?
shadowkat678 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I would love to beta this fic! I'm not really into the whole cussing every few sentences thing but I think I can look over it for this! I am not a official beta but I do a lot for friends
If you want to check out my work it's all on my file. Really, I would love to! I am really good with punctuation and am on pretty much every single day

I love description and in depth fics with deep and original plots, and this seems like one of them! and I love AU's!
I am not using periods in this review since there is a glitch that needs to be fixed where every word before one gets deleted, cause that sucks! So you need a beta I'm your girl!
semaxx3 chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
FFlossia chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
like it very much! keep going))))
Reader AZ chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
14 February 1996 was a Tuesday.
I wish you would stop using the F word.
Hericus C chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
What gets me is why Harry who has been in potions class for four years now and knows that somethings could be potentially harmful and yet appear otherwise just swallows these unknown potions without a detailed explanation as to what the medication will do. As a teen who suffered through some medical problems I always asked the doctors/nurses, etc. and never took something I didn't know-and it saved me once from a harried ER nurse giving me the wrong thing. Sometimes I think authors try to make Harry too stupid and laid back. After growing up with the Dursleys and who knows what they gave him, I say he would dump the potions when no one was looking, especially if it made his magic feel weird.
Reader AZ chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
What do prefects stand for? Basically everything Ron isn't
I always thought Dean would have made a good prefect as he was such a straight forward person. I agree that Ron was not suitable but I think Harry had too much on so I do agree with Dumbledore not giving the badge to him.
Draco was also quite unsuitable but the others in his house would not be much better.
I don't agree with much of what you say about canon but we all have our own ideas.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Hope Harry stops taking that potion and reads up on what it is in his potion book or his magic that is finally completely the burns it away from his system. I just think he just to stunned about what happened that he is just taking it but he needs to stop. Or gain control of his magic on his own and pretends to take it to fool both Dumbledore and Voldemort.

Glad he was made Prefect. That should give him some protection.

Hope he stops listening to Dumbledore soon or takes steps of his own.

I vote for Luna or Daphne. Hermione and Ginny might be to much of a weight for him even though it is nice that he acknowledges that they are girls.


Hawa DL chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
A couple transitions could've been better and you had a couple typos, but that's really good for proofing 10k words by yourself. This story's really interesting, and I can't wait to see what you come out with nest. Also, I'm always up for beta-ing since I'm waaaayy better at editing than I am at writing, but the only thing I have posted on this site is a slash story and you said you don't read that soooooo Idk. lol Hit me up if you're interested; if not, no hard feelings. Keep up the good work.
ErikArden chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Ok, I'll bite on the review. :D

Answering your question about lifting Duddly, I'd assume that if one of them was having issues, the one "making out" with Harry would eventually help the other after he got done sucking Harry's face. I doubt two magical & evil creature would be unable to lift a teenage boy, even one as large as Dudders.

Also, for the mouth thing, I'm going to assume that it's just a convenient place for them to "work their magic" so to speak. BUT, assuming it has something to do with the passageways in the body, if you charm off the mouth but leave the nose, your still hosed? Ever had milk/soda/whatever come our of your nose? Same principal I bet with a bit of magical-life-essence.

As to Dumbles good/evil question, I honestly think of him as more grey. I believe he wishes that Harry wasn't in the situation/circumstances he was/is in, but that given what he believes (Harry has to die eventually) that those bad circumstances are the best option to ensure the desired effect. Evil Dumbles wouldn't have done even as much as he did...why bother allowing Harry to live at all? Just kill him after Hagrid drops him off and he and Minerva leave and either A) Blame it on the muggles or B) say it was simply a delayed magical backlash of what Tom did to him. Good Dumbles I honestly don't see leaving Harry in an abusive home and wouldn't have allowed Snape to do what he was doing throughout the years.

Anyway, I do like what's you've got so far, hope the next chapter comes "soon".

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