Reviews for The Merging |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m re-reading this story. It’s brilliant. I noticed that I don’t like this version of Harry much. He’s entitled, self-pitying, a bully, and a braggart. Yes, he’s more proactive (not hard from canon’s standard) and more skilled, and definitely as heroic as canon Harry, but he collected a host of flaws along the way. Considering the story title, I suspect the author bringing out these flaws is intentional. Well done. I hope the author comes back to the Harry Potter universe someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The roonil waslib thing happened in the sixth book when Ron got a joke quill from the twins shop. There's no way Harry would know to reference that in the fifth year |
![]() ![]() ![]() That mark is a bs way to try and let Draco cheat his way into keeping up with Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. This story right here is why I spend hours going through stories. This story is a gem and deserves a sequel. Good show, jolly good show. |
![]() ![]() I am truly, truly enjoying this story. Its so very rare that a writer of fanfics makes me feel such emotion. |
![]() ![]() Damn I know the fic hasn't been updated in over a year but i was kinda still hoping for a Hermione x Harry ending but meh I'll keep reading anyway. |
![]() ![]() Nicholas Flamel decided to run for president, and succeeded. That's quite impressive for a man of 600 years. Did he manage to swing young voters? I want to see Flamel trying to be hip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh. One of my new favorites. I don’t know if I’ll come back and do a re-read but it was still fantastic and would totally recommend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy about the pairing, one of my top 2, I hope it all goes well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. I waqs really liking this story and then you had to go and ruin it with this bullshit. I swear 50% of Harry Potter stories are time travel or different realities. Oh well. On to the next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() best approach to all of the characters, fking good writings , pointing out the flaws and good sides of every characters , no sudden Snape grows love for Harry shit , the fanfiction is beautifully written and it is well balanced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like you have a reasoned and tolerant view of all the characters. I find your handling of them the most graceful in pretty much any fic I've encountered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Nagini kill eva. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I assumed magic. It isn't even much of a leap. Harry attacking those boys was wonderful, he wasn't very violent or edgy, just a good clean magic drive by. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story a bunch! All the characters were really compelling. Thanks for a good read! |