Reviews for Making Arrangements |
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AnimeA55Kicker chapter 18 . 5/27/2019 How wholesome |
Nyx792 chapter 15 . 5/22/2019 This is probably my umpteenth time reading this in the past few years. Truly one of my favorite stories. I would love to read a GarraNaruko story written by you. |
WhiteyWolf26 chapter 23 . 5/11/2019 Hah, truly one of my favourites for a reason. I would and did wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone interestted in the Narutoverse. I can only commend you for adhering to the implicit "rules" of this storyworld so marvellously (the mission briefing at the beginning alone was enough to hook me and not let go); it makes for a very "logical", reasonable plot, something I greatly appreciate since suspension of disbelief is something you often need too much of and that all too easily chips away at a story's quality. So, very well done! :) Same with characterisation. Everyone was written remarkably in-character. Your version of Naruto is exactly like I imagine her to be were she a girl in canon, it's astounding in its credibility. Seriously, those guys are a doozy. ;) And goodness gracious, I laughed so hard I have no words for it. I was /still/ sitting there reading at 3 AM, laughing until I couldn't even make a sound anymore. What can I say? Tsume's version of The Talk and the events surrounding that... well. :'D I also really liked your writing style, and your spelling and grammar are very good. Thank you so, so much for pulling through and finishing this amazing story! |
Fahdza chapter 11 . 5/8/2019 The secondhand embarrassment here is unreal, I had to keep taking breaks from reading to recover. |
sgriffin730 chapter 23 . 4/28/2019 I loved this so much! I had a bad week and this just perked me right up |
Bri-Bee-WR chapter 1 . 4/11/2019 Thanks for all of the laughs! I loved this story, and I loved that it was focused mainly on the character development. Character traits are true, the betterfly/deadpan/etc. inducing interactions between characters is great, and just good job. |
Hellz Bella chapter 1 . 4/10/2019 ...it's going to be murder finding another fic as good as this. From beginning to end I absolutely loved it! Would have commented more but I couldn't stop haha. A very satisfying read |
Acacia Vix chapter 23 . 2/21/2019 OMG! This was absolutely bloody phenomenal! I loved this soooooo much! Thankyouthankyouthankyou soooooooo much for writing this! I have literally been up from 9 pm to 5 am reading this! I am soooooo tired from being up all night, but it was 120% worth it because this story is amazing! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I LOVE IT! |
Zeuseus chapter 23 . 2/6/2019 Thank you for this glorious work of laughs and cathartic release. I'm not usually a fan of the Kakashi/fem!Naruto pairing (for the usual reasons) but this was a really fun read and very well written. Thank you also for the number of useful quotes you have provided :) |
Kat1132 chapter 23 . 1/30/2019 This was such a delight from beginning to end. You have the whole cast down so well that it was like coming home. Thank you for not trying to draw out and dramatize the sub-plot mission, and ending it in such a wonderfully anti-climatic style was just perfect. I was laughing the whole way through. So much so that I read several pages to my sister. The development of their relationship felt so natural and unhurried. You really let the budding relationship breathe and grow. I even ultimately found myself liking the device of Naruto's initial mission because it was clearly the catalyst they both needed to move forward and change their relationship. You made it really well clear that if something hadn't changed, they would have remained the same. I also liked that you stuck with what Kakashi liked about Naruto being her eyes, and that when we got in Kakashi's POV, her eyes came up in nearly every interaction he had with her. You did such a fabulous job with this story and I got such joy reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm off to go scout for more of your works. Thank's again! |
TwistedWorldsExist chapter 23 . 1/24/2019 I love this story! freaking amazing |
MiharuTousaka chapter 22 . 1/17/2019 All that fluff! They’re so cute I just can’t! *squeals at the cuteness* |
MikeMystery chapter 23 . 1/17/2019 Love your story! Great work, because it has humor, drama, romance and the typical pre-Shippuuden adventure spirit of Naruto. It is also so far the only good work with that pairing, because it builds the characters as they live in the story instead of inventing flimsy reasons why they should be together. Here the chemistry between the characters just works. Best regards, Mike |
arcobalenox27 chapter 23 . 1/5/2019 I love this story, before I started to read this book before I started reading I thought it was going to be a cliche Naruto and Kakashi. I fell in love with this book this beautiful piece literature it is amazing it's different it's funny thank you |
BUBU30 chapter 22 . 12/18/2018 OMG! I think you do not have how very happy this chapter made me. I almost want to scream, is it a joke ?! Because it took me a lot of time to finish reading it secretly at work but enjoy every second of it without wanting it to end. I love your fic so much, a long time ago that I did not enjoy reading so much. What I like most and especially getting closer to the end (as in Naruto), is the evolution and natural progression of the characters and their relationships. Sasuke is still unbearable and conceited but you personified him in an incredible way. I died of laughter with Naruto's relationship with Ino and Sakura, besides that I loved your Sakura. The way this chapter captures Naru's relationship with Kakashi is so incredibly perfect that I can slowly die of happiness. Kakashi's declaration of love totally stole my heart ! Where do you get such a love? Also, Narutin is adorable, bright and powerful, I love her very much. (I say it because I saw Boruto and I detest the bitter, sad and collapsed Naruto: c with an unbearable son). I was very happy! I do not want to read the epilogue because it will break my heart to know that there is no other chapter. |