|Reviews for Awake|
| sunshine0375 chapter 7 . 5/20
Since you asked for spelling/grammar edits, and even though this story is not marked complete and appears abandoned, I though I would share. I have read nearly all of your stories and one little word keeps jumping out at me. Peak. A peak is a point, like a mountain top. However, you have been using it as peek, which means to glance quickly or to look furtively, as from a place of concealment.
Grammar is a small peeve of mine, which I can happily ignore if the writing is excellent, as yours is. Here's hoping you make your was back to my favorite ship, HG/SS.
| Sendryl chapter 1 . 4/7
I know this will probably never be finished, but I'm so glad the last chapter is at least a decent stopping point.
Thank you for giving us that, at least.
I would, of course, adore you if you decided to finish this.
It's so wonderfully written after all... It really deserves an ending.
| Snaperipper chapter 19 . 3/15
Please continue this story.
| jaspersbelle chapter 19 . 12/23/2014
Well, technically this is a work in progress, but I have to say this a really good stopping place. What a satisfying story.
| Free2BMe1 chapter 18 . 12/3/2014
It's almost a year since your last update of this fine story. Any chance for more?
| 2NiCe4U chapter 19 . 11/21/2014
Love, love, love this story! Do you have more available? :)
| tulsa chapter 19 . 11/6/2014
please, please, do not abanndon this awesome story
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/14/2014
Is there more?
| Sue Donym chapter 19 . 9/30/2014
Oh my goodness, how did I not notice that this was still in progress? Aieeee!
Anyway, I hope you will update this. It's utterly fantastic. This Severus is super sexy and we haven't had our love scene yet! The dialogue is this story has been perfect. I enjoy the interaction between our golden trio as well.
Please don't forget about us!
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/28/2014
This is a beautifully written story and I love it. Please, please, please write more!
| FanFiclver chapter 19 . 8/10/2014
I do so hope you haven't abandoned this story... Its truly lovely.
| arctic-kat chapter 19 . 7/7/2014
This story is perfect!
| Shi'ar chapter 19 . 6/24/2014
I do not know how I've managed to miss out on your work for so long... But am I ever grateful to finally come across it! This story is breathtaking, utterly beautiful! I have fallen in love with it! Your writing is magnificent, true literary beauty. Your portrayal of both Severus and Hermione are spot on and a pleasure to read! I eagerly await the next chapter and cannot wait to see what unfolds! Thank you so very much for sharing this brilliant story and your amazing talent! :-)
| EclecticBonVivant chapter 19 . 6/5/2014
So good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and all the ones after that as well). I love the way the SSHG relationship is developing.
| just me 5000 chapter 19 . 5/25/2014
Love the story so far. I like the fact she is older in your stories. Though I love them as a couple I can't see Snape falling for a teenager. I do hope you continue writing this story. Thanks for your efforts thus far.