Reviews for The Golden Devil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This Naruto REALLY doesn’t seem like he should be a devil. I think this story seems very good, except of that. That piece sucks. Also, doesn’t the start part explaining what characters say sound like a Noble Phantasm chant? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing and I truly hope you continue it! I loved reading it and would love to see what happens next! :) |
![]() ![]() Naruto stop being a pussy look what happened |
![]() ![]() Bro what the hell is nghrhrhhgnrhrh If it’s meant to be the things that kinda time skip use a line —- _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my daaaays this was an absolute blast to read! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() porfavor sigue esta historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this great story again soon it's been quite awhile since last update and I really want to see what happens next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its just one of those days Where you don't want to wake up Everything is fucked Everybody sucks You don't really know why But you want to justify Rippin' someone's head off No human contact And if you interact Your life is on contract Your best bet is to stay away motherfucker It's just one of those days It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, let the shit slip Or you'll be leaving with a fat lip It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, talking that shit Its just one of those days Feeling like a freight train First one to complain Leaves with a bloodstain Damn right I'm a maniac You better watch your back Cause I'm fucking up your program And then your stuck up You just lucked up Next in line to get fucked up Your best bet is to stay away motherfucker It's just one of those days It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, let the shit slip Or you'll be leaving with a fat lip It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, talking that shit Punk, so come and get it I feel like shit My suggestion, is to keep your distance Cause right now I'm dangerous We've all felt like shit And been treated like shit All those motherfuckers That want to step up I hope you know, I pack a chainsaw I'll skin your ass raw And if my day keeps going this way, I just might Break something tonight I pack a chainsaw I'll skin your ass raw And if my day keeps going this way, I just might Break something tonight I pack a chainsaw I'll skin your ass raw And if my day keeps going this way, I just might Break your fucking face tonight Give me something to break Just give me something to break How bout yer fucking face I hope you know, I pack a chainsaw What! A chainsaw What! A motherfucking chainsaw What! So come and get it It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, let the shit slip Or you'll be leaving with a fat lip It's all about the he-says, she-says bullshit I think you better quit, talking that shit Punk, so come and get it |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE! I KNOW YOU STILL ACTIVE SO PLEASE CONTINUE |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is incredible. I hope you continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an incredible story so far! I really hope that you update it at some point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf itachi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story gonna continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was interesting Jugo saved them that's cool and now the real fun begins, and the ending was confusing though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So yet again u have Mito being captured getting kind of old already, but enough about that Pedomaru and his faggot siblings are already corpses just like there experiments, I look forward to seeing them die what a bunch of weak pansies, Jugo is weird but whatever. |