Reviews for Ill-Tempered Steel
Glaceon Mage chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Um... since Volkner uses Electric types, wouldn't he be at an advantage against Skarmory anyway since it's part Flying? I found that very strange, since he would also get STAB in addition to the 2x damage with the Electricity.
Other than that, this was both funny and well written. The description was just enough to let me visualize the scene, and the lines felt like they were the right length. Good work!
KHLegacy chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Ha ha ha this is great I loved this poor Flint he should know better being a member of the Sinnoh Elite four good story!
Rapis-Razuri chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
*giggles* I love Flint and Volkner, seriously.
Any particular reason why Skarmory's not a fan of Volkner? XD