|Reviews for Friends Only|
| KnightofTheWind chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
Like always brilliantly written! I know this is an older work but i still enjoy reading these stories as i feel like i can actually envision what you have described. Plus silver seems to be portrayed like any relatable nervous first date reck. And that's why i love this.
| Lilly The Omega Wolf chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Aaaaaaand I have a massive grin! This story is so cute!
I would call this short but effective. They sure moved in fast there at the end :)
| Silaya Arctic Prower chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
pen and sword are like onof the best parts of your story. i love thoe guys. anyway keep being awesom
| INVISIUS chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Honestly I like the way you ended it there, it flowed really well :) but I won't complain if you do make more :]
| starfiction123 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Another masterpiece request pensword lol. Loved it! And pen and sword remind me of the cute old couple on the swiffer commercials lol so cute!
| NyanRainbowPrincess chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
I think the story's good the way it is :) lol, sword makes me laugh XD
| Kira-writer chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Realmente lindo! Me encanto :D
Es muy buena tal como esta ahora.
| Comment person chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
This was very heartwarming. The plotline was basic, but it managed to hold over till the end of the story.
I do like how the two never directly state 'I love you' to each other. The incorporation of italicized thoughts and sound effects in general text made the reading smooth. Overall, heartwarming and fluffy.
From, Comment person
P.S. I find some particular interest that you made this story as a late birthday gift for Ember The Flame...and my birthday happens to be the next day after this story was posted. I do hope Ember The Flame doesn't mind sharing.
| ultimateCCC chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Ever heard of a quintuple date?
| Ember The Flame Guardian chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Damn, that was cute!
I love it!