Reviews for Don't Judge A Book By It's Cover |
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![]() ![]() This gave me cancer |
![]() ![]() I love this!1! 3 so hot |
![]() ![]() Love, love, LOVE it. It was both sweet and hot. Also loved the way described Punk Britian. Excellent job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last line seemed to me an awkward addition to that paragraph... Also, put translations or author's notes away from the story narrative. It interferes with the flow. Nice first try in writing a lemon. Honestly, I don't think I ever will, but I can't deny that I enjoy lemon every now and then. :) As long as it's got some sort of plot, and not a fling. Write on.! Yuna |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...this was so intense XD I never expected to like lemon X/X specially USUK(I kinda prefer FrUK but USUK is still good they can be a cute couple) this was really good X3 and punk Arthur sounded cool :3 you will defenitely see me again XD PS: (if you've seen this before we have similar taste) would someone please read my fanfiction? Please? I'm one of those people that need to feel needed(?) to continue something...it's a gerita so if you're interested in it please read and if not but you know someone who is please recomend it! It's called "I can see your smile" and I apologize for the bad summary I didn't know what to write there -_-U I would also like to recomend a fanfiction by Ocean Ecco it's called "painters of the afterlife" and it's really good if you don't want to read mine read hers/his(?) it's really good! :3 well that's all thanks and hopefully read you soon :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so fudging cute! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! HAPPILY EVER AFTER :DDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW SO CUTE (/W\) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn you! I wanted to hear his answer! gbndgnklskmg nda. now I have to wait... author your a jerk...I know your a jerk I know..lol where did that come from 0_o..but seriously what the hell. -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() T'WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW COULD YOU! TT just leaving it there...you're EVIL! and your right i do hate you! jk jk LOL tho XD. i was on the verge of crying when i saw it only ended there XD. i think you did alright for your first lemon. and by the way that was pretty hot...[dies of nosebleeds] update soon PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GUHhhhhhh—punk!Arthur you seductive little punk [nosebleeds] I love how you emphasized both's sexuality. Literally made me laugh. I-I can't wait for the next chapter /w/ /shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Oh mai gawsh. |