man , this story is just fucking great! you really must continue it as soon as possibe.

I love the last part "Yeah, Jack. I like you a little" Wow I could see him say that.

this story is awesome! It has been awhile since I have read a good riddick/Jack story. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm glad she got him out I can't really believe she killed the guy but people do crazy things when their in love. update soon I love this story.

wow this is soooo good, you've got to update soon, Oh god I hope Jack doesn't die, please update soon.

Oh my god...that fucking bastard Carson! I hope one of them kills him...neways...keep going. great story.

Shazzablue,

I can honestly say you are one hell of a writer, It's clear I'm becomming a huge fan of your's.

This fic keeps on getting better and more interesting by each chp. The last few chp were fab.I like the was you didn't have Riddck and Jack in the sack straight away,the sexual tension there was just perfect. * Now If I was Jack he'd be flat on his back without so much as saying hello* LOL

These cliffhanger's will be the end of me though!Heehee

Keep them comin'!

I have a feeling that there's gonna be a whole lot of OMG chp's to come!

Don't keep us waiting!LOL

Oh my god I can't believe Carson did that. I can't wait to see what happens next

omg i love this story you better continue with these chapters

keep up the good work

This is one of the best PB stories and has definitely one of the most plausible scenarios for how Riddick and Jack's futures evolve.

I'm getting a bit worried about Riddick now though. That Carson is a worry.

I don't write fic myself so I don't really know how to write constructive criticism, sorry. I just like all your story a lot.

wow this is just great so far, I love it, I hope you update it soon, I'm so anxious for more.

Well, we're all warmed up now, aren't we? These last two chapters were excellent for getting an inner glimpse of your characters. Can't wait for the next one. Thanks

As always, you've kept us obsessed with your story. This new chapter seems to indicate that you're planning to continue the story on for quite a while with more adventure to come. Can't wait.

Wonderful. I'm really enjoying your story and the slow pace that you're keeping us at. Anticipation is half the fun, right? I also think that your character development is quite good. I'm believing their actions and diaogues no problem. Thanks

Hi! The story is going great. Sorry I haven't reviewed the last couple chapters, been sort of busy. I promise I'll do better though. I know how important reviews are. Anyways, I love the way the story is going and I can't wait to read more in the very near future