You are gonna write more, right? I mean, cuz, you just have to. If you don't, i will just die. I will, i promise. I will shrivel up like a leech with salt poured on it; like a grape in hot sun, like a wilting flower, like a ..oh.. :: smiles meekly:: i am getting carried away aren't I?

Well, the point is that you *HAVE* to write more!

Pleeeaaassee!

:)

-brina

Not the brightest crayon in the box: loved it. Very good dialogue and I liked her rational for wanting to tell him and not everyone else.

I also like how you showed Riddick's character to be the one who decided to go back. It was very well written.

I have been following this story and I just love it. I really can't wait for the next chapter. One of the best parts of the story (in my opinion) are the thoughts that they both have. Very funny and real sounding. Another aspect I'm enjoying is the way you're leading us very slowly to a romantic situation. Very believable.

Thanks

You are doing an outstanding job with this story, keep up the good work.

*Jumping up and down and shouting YAY at the top of my voice* another four chp's... And jeeze they were great, you write so beautifull. I love this fic, it get's more interesting by the each chp. Can't wait for the next *cough* four chp's toinght! LOL

Great story Shazza. The story is progressing nicely.

Since I'm beta reader for Shazza's writing I can tell you the next couple of chapters are well worth the wait. Not that she's really making you wait that long. I won't mention the story I've been waiting for her to continue for 4 years now. (Ah the glamorous life of a beta reader.) LOL

Seriously the story is looking good. Keep up the great work, sis.

oh no, you can't stop it there, come on update soon, I can't wait...lol really good story.

Hey!

how DARE you stop right there! I dont' care if you have an actual life! You are to spend every waking moment of your time forfeighting, food, sleep and sex (alright not sex) to write more of this story!

:)just kidding..kinda

Ypu just have to promise me that you will write more.

-brina

This is starting to get good! Actually it's been good all along but you know what I mean. Please continue. I cannot wait to read more

Shazzablue,

Just have to say a what a great start.I like the way you have made Riddick & Jack in this fic, very much stay in character which in turn makes them very believable and such a joy to read. But... *shaking my finger at you* How could you leave it like this? ...Arwwww man my imagination is running wild, you simply have to post another chp very soon or else... or else.. I will... ummm I dunno but post it soon lol

Oh! Please do continue this story. Its so good so far. I like the way you are distinguishing Jack and Riddick's characters. You can really get a feel for them and kind of get to know them. Good stuff. Lovin' it.

Sounds interesting, must read more ... However, 43? Couldn't you cheat abit an make him a little younger, say 37. None the less, do carry on.