this is so awesme omg i love it

love it muchness and such

this is kick ass...love it muchness and such

Phew. I made it though. Excellent story. Alas, no sequel after all...:o

LOVE YOUR STORY! I just finished it and im in love with you! lol nah but seriously you have the characters of riddick and jack down perfectly! i hope you decide to continue this story but if not, it was perfect all the same...ill be looking out for you from now on!

OMG! That was so F-ing funny! Dying to read the next story! Hope your still working on it, because i'm still waiting for them to actually like get together! Please!

man great should do a sequel. this story is kinda old though. chap 38 cracked me .

I like it. The whole story was very well written and I do hope you write more. Maybe you have and I haven’t seen it but anyways, I loved this first part. You did a great job and the love scene was hott, they’re banter was hilarious, you did a great job with the dialogue and you kick ass. So, with that in mind, keep it up and write more soon okay.

damn good story, imma head over to the sequel-o wait, there ISN'T one. argh, damnit c'mon don't write and good story and then say ur gonna do a sequel and you don't. i mean this story was awesome, i can't wait to see where the sequel would go! well i hope you do make a sequel and stuff :-)

good luck,

lamyka

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh no! i've only just seen Pitch black (and immediately fell in love with Vin Diesel)so i then found this fic and i absolutly love it and i was really looking forward to reading the sequel...only to find you hadnt written one! why would you do this to me?

Oh no! i've only just seen Pitch black (and immediately fell in love with Vin Diesel)so i then found this fic and i absolutly love it and i was really looking forward to reading the sequel...only to find you hadnt written one! why would you do this to me?

Wow! I read this all in one night...I'm so happy I found it...it's def. one of my favorites...

That was funny. You so have to write the sequal and you should definetely put that little snippet in there. I so can't wait until you start writing the next story, I want to find out what happens to them and if he ever figures out what he wants to be around her; big brother, or mega lover.

So, she's unhappy about the separation, he's unhappy about the separation. At least if they can't be together and happy, they are separated and miserable.