Reviews for Routine
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
In terms of writing, this is very good - your SPaG is flawless, and the story flows smoothly, with no awkwardly worded sentences. The balance between description and dialogue is also good, and you wrote the sex well enough, without falling into the cliches and strange descriptions that many fanfic authors seem to enjoy. You captured Snape's terseness and sharpness in speech, also. I will say that both Harry and Snape were decidedly OOC, but I suppose a story like this can't truly be in-character for either one.
Soccerisawesome19 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Sorry no no no no no. I just can NOT stand HarryxSnape fics. I just can't. I'm really sorry.
I tried my best to read this, but I was kind of wincing the whole time.
I can say that this is written nicely and that the grammar is good.
J.F.C chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Okay, definitely was not expecting to find such a story in here... but it was written well for what it is. For some reason it immediately reminded me of the story "Voldemort Goes Back To School." ;)
Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
Well, this is interesting. Not my style to be honest, but well-written for what it is.

I'm not really fond of any form of un-consenting sex in any way, shape or form, nor am I a fan of this pairing, so I can't say this appealed to me. I do like the way you wrote this though, and your descriptions. Looking at you strictly as an author, it was really well done, and from that perspective, great :)

Well done!
eostby chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
This story creeps me out on multiple levels. Harry doesn't even seem like he's in full control of his brain for most of this story, which fits, but is still fairly disturbing. Your writing seems good, in spite of the content. Well done.
Mooncher123 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I loved the chapter I'm such a big fan of slash and strangely rape,,,,yeah anyway hope you write more stories like this - your fan xxx
lou chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
oh my holy crap! the tinge of regret in his voice makes Harry's nerves sing perfect.
Lilium Willow chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Woah, was totally not expecting that end.
SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Wow that is truly dark and twisted and I have a feeling that I'm going to hell for liking it. The emotions felt so real, so raw and tainted that it was beautiful in a strange way, maybe not beautiful I think, but perhaps haunting? Great job anyway. :)
Nagilover4ever chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Love it. Wish there was more.