The hottest dumpfire i have ever read, that i managed to give myself a chance to read a few chapters before giving up. Tbh, this feels like a crack fic. A crack fic that doesn't know humor, and makes me want to puke and regret wasting my time reading whatever this is. Its all so shallow, very shallow that even kids wouldn't dive into the water cuz there is barely any water to begin with.

Like seriously, why was the training given by Naruto to his students worthless? 3 years haved passed with this supposedly "deadly" training and then what, Mina almost dying and Armin just realizing the benefits of Wind Jutsu to propell himself without using gas? What was even this "deadly" training? A damn tea party of Naruto showing off his skills for 3 DAMN YEARS and having his students be the peanut gallery, mindlessly clapping in awe of his circus show? Because what i have expected was them to have increased chakra control, reserves, specialized jutsus that fit their element with a sprinkle of different ones, the BASICS, increased strength, endurance, temperament, attitude, ethic and etc. that would have made them competent shinobi that have greater chances of surviving and high kill rates against titans. But no, its like they never even did any DAMN training (like using chakra to walk on walls, trees and water for one) and just listen to what Naruto is capable of doing. BRUH.

We could have seen some nice training and scenes of different people discovering what they can do with chakra, get creative or stronger and find more of what they can do to efficiently kill titans, but no, we skip that gold so we can see Naruto have a harem and make him fuck Misaka(I don't need to go past 5 chapters to know this happening). And to my surprise, i skipped for a bit to see if this fic was really still worth it if i push thru the cringe my body has been enduring, only to see Annie confessing her love for Naruto and them HAVING SEX THE NEXT CHAPTER. Was there even any deep exploration to Annie's mindset? Or did Naruto just did a deep exploration to something else, something deeper than Annie's character in this fic.

Speaking of characters, they feel like low-budget actors barely surviving minimum wage and are just being forced to act in and be done with it. So damn shallow. Shallow.

And lets talk about this "Im only human" excuse from Naruto. BRUH. In the face of titans, they're frickin fodders. He is a damn shinobi, a man yearning to become the Hokage, the strongest SHINOBI capable of protecting his village. This "Im only human" ahh quote contradicts what humanity needs to survive against the titans, and Naruto self-depreciates himself as only human?! That's so damn embarrassing to read. His character is all over the place tht he doesn't even need the Hiraishin no Justsu anymore. He, like all the characters in this fic, is empty.

Then here comes the biggest frickin nonsense I hvae ever read in this fic, that, for SOME REASON, Naruto gained the ability to titan shift. Without the titan serum or even the act of eating another titan shifter after. And all because he drank titan blood?! WHAT THE F*CK. This further solidifies that this was damn crack fic all along. A crack fic not worth reading at all. Its cringe as f*ck.

This fic is cringe down to its core. And shallow, no depth. Wasted potential cuz its focuses more on flexing what Naruto can do and there is no actual character development, only pathetic characters.

hey NeonZangetsu can you please write one story without romance as refreshing change of pace

I'd prefer it if 9 years old Mikasa thinks of Naruto as older brother figure

9 chapters until the first tfs reference, that's kind of impressive. Usually your stories have one in the first 3

seeing as this is dead in the water
i suggest ya’ll read Monarch by TheChamp123,
it’s a banger

with AoT anime ending. will you continue this?

Please continue. AOT anime ended. This needs a finale.

Binged and I want more I love this soo much

I'm very confused and truthfully Marco's dialogue feels forced to vindicate her or any fault. You clearly stated she swung the weapon. You clearly stated she was surprised when the blade broke. You clearly stated that the blade did touch him. If he was a lesser person, that would have killed him. His dialogue makes no sense here and seems to only be here so she isnt at fault when she one hundred percent tried to kill him.

Neon Zangetsu is the best writer this site has. Unfortunately, he tends to lose himself, turning his extraordinary story insufferable. You are in dire need of an editor if you want to pursue a career as a writer.

I want to know if Mikasa will have Naruto's child Himawari maybe

Pls update as the aot anime is almost over and I want to see how this fanfic goes genuinely

Let’s be honest it doesn’t matter if Historia is lesbian or not she would be forced to have a child because she is the last royal unless you make it like the Hokages where the Queen would choose the next or if she died the council will. Let’s be honest Ymir shouldn’t even be in the walls unless she has the jaw titan and she legit left Historians for no reason she had at least 8-9 years left to live

Oi! What’s with that troll down there. Can’t you let decent folks read in peace?! Shoo!

As to the rest, this is an old work indeed, I can tell by the style. Glad to see you’ve improved over the years.

I want an ending trolololol