Reviews for Wand, Knife and Silence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You should do one shot of when Harry found the ferry and he went back to Hogwarts and told serious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sporadic is right! Well, it has been eight years, so I'm betting that you have gone on to better things in your life. but what I am hoping for is that you will have an inspiration one day that will outline the rest of the story for you, then you get a jolt of mojo that will give you the impetus to finish this story! Really, hope live eternal! An interesting story. I like your characterizations. I do hope that you come back to this someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I hope that Samantha feels that Sirius is worthy, and will resolve herself to NOT killing him, and that her Black Widow days are over! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't commented on wrong words or grammar issues. This is fanfiction after all, not something from Simon and Schuster or HarperCollins. But - an Auror Corpse? (in the headline, no less) Corp - a group of people. Corpse - a dead person. Just sayin'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you had included a few of the years of how the boys bonded, of their training, and some of their schooling at ? - Beauxbaton? Japan? Brazil? |
![]() ![]() This is not the HP raised by the Zabini family I was looking for but I'm still going to read it. I know I started to read this one before but never got to finish it. Maybe at the time it wasn't finished or my computer crashed, and I lost it. I don't really know. The one I was looking for would give Good Ole Fumblemort more than just nightmares. At around age eight or so he caught an adult spying on a young girl's bedroom for the roof of her house. Harry captured and tortured him for it. The man had been caught before, but nothing had ever made him stop. The punishment Harry inflicted on him stuck for the rest of his life and would make Good Ole Fumbelmort very, very upset at Harry for doing it. Harry took a pipe, super cooled it, coated it in mineral salts and spices, the very hottest he could get before shoving it up the man's ass and pulling it back out. Along with his small intestine lining. Not all the salts or spices came out with the pipe. Now he has a very unpleasant time when his bowels move. Maybe I'll get lucky, and it'll be in this as a flashback to Harry's youth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story but the last few chapters had some time skips and summaries of action that made it feel rushed. Still thank you for your time and effort in building this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() This came recommended to me. I wish it had not. |
![]() ![]() Thx for writing |
![]() ![]() Good shit. I despise when stories have these elements to them & there's no payoff to seeing the evil bastards get a brutal comeuppance. Why tf would someone be hesitant to make the protagonist just as ruthless and cold blooded as the fucks who are evil? It's fan works & there aren't any rules you have to follow. I hate that cheap ass "be better than yout enemies" bullshit. No, you get rid of the sick fuckers, by any means necessary, hoping terror and fear are their last moments. Bravo for this chapter! |
![]() ![]() Are we redeeming Snape? Can't say I mind it but he has to atone for the past & be upfront with his remorse and regret. |
![]() ![]() Ok, this is good and cool. I haven't finished the chapter but it doesn't seem like you're going to alienate hermione & have her be interested in someone from harry's school in italy. That's good. I don't really like stories that either bash hermione or have her & harry's relationship be hostile. I could gaf about ron..kill him if you want. But hermione is a favorite character of mine. She literally reminds me of an ex girlfriend I had back in school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesomeness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What?! THE F**K? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, not Molly Weasley, the crazy bitch! You tell her, Ginny! |