|Reviews for The Day After|
| RocknRollagirl chapter 1 . 1/17
Hey there:) I just scrolled over the list of your fics and found this little piece it that left me in awe over your writing once more. I love how you structured this shot, the descriptions are so vivid and spot on and there is so much heartache in there:) Amazing work:)
| Mystic25 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
nice, I like the sleeping in the planks with no discernible shape part. Very descriptive.
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
That takes me back to all the brotherly love and hurt...Esp Dean screaming Sam in he'll, that always breaks my work
| GaelicAngel chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
You know I just said to Dizzo the other day you don't see a lot how Dean got rescued from Hell but I know that I have read this it reminds me that you don't see a lot of fics covering just what Sam went through just after Dean went to Hell. I n my opinion they blew to fast past the angst and emotion Sam had to go through without Dean and the reunion was over way to way fast.
This was a brilliant piece of work, sad and full of angst and shows a person just how much Sam needs his older brother.
I loved it as always and a great piece, terrific writing.
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Haven't read one set at this time it seems like forever. :D I see this as exactly the way Sam would have awoken maybe the day after he buried Dean. It's about the way it would hit him and he'd be real sore from digging THAT grave.
Nicely done. :)
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Lovely and graphic line by line. You can taste his misery.
| KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
He is a mess; of pain and loss and misery and determination.
He tries to take another sip, but he raises the bottle and his head at the same time and the top of the bottle hits his teeth, splitting his lip and now he tastes blood.
OMG! That image...those words...they burn with raw power and love and need and desperation!
I am in aw!
Adore this piece so much...and I see many more to read. Where the hell have I been?
You are amazing!
And I smell a sequel to this one...
Sunshine and much thanks for your talents!
| shenshen1977 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Holy hell, my feels! Well done, my friend, well done!
| SPNxBookworm chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
You sure know how to shatter my heart. GUH! This was heart breaking. I cried like a baby when Dean died...and you just reopened past wounds...AHHH! this was amazing! Loved it! You did an outstanding job!