Reviews for Jubbi No shadow
Pravda93 chapter 5 . 4/26/2015
Nice, thanks for updatting it. I waited it for so long. Anyway keep up the good work.
Alex2909 chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
interesting story. like the genderbend
Elia950 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
This is interesting *_* I've finished to play PERSONA 4 GOLDEN yesterday, and then i watched all the anime last week. i love that story! *_*

Good WOrk!
jlink chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
interesting so this like a mix of Persona 4/P4 the animation/P4 Golden, aw i wish you can make this a harem the pairing
BigBossVince chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
You have a lot of love interests, so I say go for the harem. I may be bias but there aren't harems in the Persona Fanfiction archive...let alone a crossover/ Choking not Chocking and Cook not Cock..Just for reference...I'll be waiting for next chapter
BigBossVince chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
Few Tips. I can't be a beta because I'm busy...but, to point out some things that you can commit to memory: Maybe not Mabby. Yosuke not Yusuke. I'm, not him. Sound, not Should. capital at the beginning of a quote. Period for abbreviations( You put Mr Morooka...which isn't actually ignorable but since I'm pointing out what I saw...). Sorry for being a grammar should make a note of the common mistakes you make in a separate notepad or somewhere you can access while you write your chapter. Can't wait for the next
daniel 29 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
If you can pull off how Naoto looks at the end of the persona 4 videogame then I don't mind the pairing
alchemists19 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
BigBossVince chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Get yourself a beta. I'm always thrilled to read a Naruto/Persona 4 crossover simply because there are none that are consistent. This however I'd love to follow this AFTER grammar and spelling the way Japanese for ten tails is Juubi. 2 U's not 2 B's. Best of luck to you
jmspikey chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
I'm getting Naruto/Naoto vibes from this if that's were its heading in then yay!