|Reviews for Flynn is the name|
| Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Not bad! I think you could've done a lot more showing than telling, though, and to slow down the narrative a bit as it feels kinda rushed. Still, I find it quite warming. Good job!
| melinda08 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
so good! you really do a great job writing Flynn and his conflicted emotions. I hope you will continue to write- I am a big fan of yours!