|Reviews for Where There's Smoke|
| mudkipz chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Ooooh I like this
| Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Kay, first of all, the summary definitely caught my attention.
I like how you went through this. The pacing you set was just right, and it really kept me reading in a steady pace. There was tension throughout, mostly if Jesse was going to hurt Flynn/Walter Jr. The ending was a nice touch, not necessarily about telling Flynn about his father but Jesse working himself to do so.
With all that aside, I am particularly glad that I have read this. So kudos to you and keep it up!
| toledo girl chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I wish this is how the show would have went. I really didn't care for Hank being there to be honest. Besides, this would have been a lot more interesting, seeing how Flynn would have reacted to hearing his father's story through Jesse. Sure Skyler told him later on, but Jesse was the one there the entire time. He could have told Flynn all the details that Skyler didn't even know. He could have painted the entire picture for Flynn.
| RedKetchup chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Well done, very in character.
| ImLostForever chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Awesome! I actually wish this had happened in the episode...
| PheonixFire316 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
I wished there was a scene between Flynn and Jesse, a scene like this between the two would've been just great.