Reviews for through these labyrinthine forests of empty lungs and broken hearts
cassino chapter 1 . 2/18/2019
what a beautiful tale! your words are poetry in motion, vivid, heartbreaking and lovely all at the same time. i absolutely adore how you've written this. i've been a fan of mythology for as long as i can remember and this brought together some of my favourite myths. well done! i've never liked a story quite as much before this. it' l
antarcticas chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
beautiful!
natsumtorou chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
I'm not in the hunger games fandom, but wow at your writing style, I really love it! Your descriptions are so lovely and the story flows so well. Plus I like how you manage to intertwine mythology and the characters from hg in, absolutely superb! :D
seeking-out-sunshine chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
I really loved your perception on the mythologies here and this was such an amazing read. I'm so in love with this universe you have created... ugh amazing
pretty-little-gymnast chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
So. Confused.
kitty-deactivated chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I loved it! Great ideas and everything!
Witch Hunter 6699 chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Nice
robbstarkswoman chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Oh my god. This is amazing. I love, love, love how Annie is powerful and I just wow. This is great. I don't know what to say, other than well done.
elizabeth tudors chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
oh my gosh, i'm so confused sorry :/ i really love your writing style and i kind of get the concept of it but wow what is going on with all the gods and goddesses wow i just dont get it :(
musiclover3 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
It took me a while to understand this but I /get/ it now and it's all so much more beautiful and /amazing/ now that I do.

I love the little snatches of canon, the language, the different various gods, and it all makes sense perfectly and the language and descriptions were so pretty and gritty and just asdfghjkl.

It's all too brilliant for my eyes to heart to handle.

musiclover3
valhallan valkyries chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
absolutely amazing! your writing really shone through and the mythology refs were incredible!
compartmental chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
ugh okay so I reviewed this earlier but apparently FFN ate it? so hello friend here I am.

I don't necessarily know how to sum this up (10k is a lot to take it). I love Neil Gaiman but I haven't read American Gods. Based off this, I think I'd like it. (:

I just. I'm so jealous. Give me your talent.
truces chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
/settles in
sorry this is so late! procrastination is deadly ;)

firstly, youth has been the song that i just chill out to and it relaxes me so much when i'm stressed so already very excited. :)

wooo coffeshop au's /shot

all your gods are so cool and it's reminding me a lot of secrets of the immortal nicholas flamel

the bit about meeting death too many times to count was really moving.

ANNIE'S A MUSE AAAH MAKES PERFECT SENSE TO ME :DDD

oooh, the ending was really sweet and made me very happy

my main critique was that although i enjoyed all your poetic description, it started to feel like it was rambling at times; a bit too flowery. i'm quite fond of simple writing though, so this is more of a personal preference. other than that, i adored this story. it was creative, romantic, and so well-written. love yooou, zoey! &hearts
harper price chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
O_O zoey. you use words i don't even know. i would search them all up, but the list is wayyyyyyyyy too long. and you're fourteen. how. the comparison of the hg characters to gods & goddesses was just perfection. you are like full of creativity and i'm just so uncreative. ODESTA. that's like my OTP for thg. no. i can't. this fic was the epitome of perfection. best freaking fic i ever read. this is just...you're one of the best writers i ever know. one day you'll be published and i'll be like i knew her when...but siriusly this is flawless and just so beautiful and i can actually see it as a real published story and all the references to everything are just perfect. this fic is so beautifully crafted and i really don't know what else to say. blown away. i'm speechless. you're...no, i can't even. this is the best story every like siriusly no words can describe this perfection & flawlessness ilysm ohmygoshicorns omg omg omg omg omg /faves

xx rachel
oh. i'm on fire chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
ho hum. it sucked.

jks.

it was friggin' awesome. and fabulously confusing! all those pantheons o.e
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