|Reviews for Final Vengence|
| System inactive chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
It is good but seems a little bit sped up, it jumps into the plot a little to quickly, you want a nice slow transition to the plot to keep interest. Plus the fight scenes need to be more detailed and longer, I seen a lot of stories that people have been turned off from because of 5 second fight scenes that only exist in 3 chapters.
But other then that it is good and keep up the good work!