|Reviews for Alloy|
| mel.xo chapter 26 . 5/25
I love your Toni stark! She's just as crazy as the original if not more so. Of course she's friends with Johnny Storm, their personalities (minus her braininess) are identical. And only Toni could beat up and then become friends with Logan - in a day. Harley was adorable in the IM3 arc, loved him in the film and love him here too. In fact those chapters were probably my favourite. I really liked all the random marvel characters that were included, especially Coulson and his not-avengers team. Toni and her collection of AIs are adorable. Jarvis is one of my favourite characters in this, he's just so sassy! And also guardians of the galaxy actually does sound like a name Toni would suggest hahaha
In the most recent chapter, I was so confused at the start with the bionic eye and lawyer, I was like is she making an eye for Fury? And then I realised daredevil! Can't wait! Also can't wait to see more Peter, I love reading Toni and his interactions. And this Bruce and Toni situation. Woahhh, so that's what happens when you mix the two with drugs.
This has been super fun to read and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Shuuwai chapter 26 . 5/21
Gah adored it!
And haha age of ultron :P
Any chance of seeing Wanda and Pietro? :o (or which version will you use? :o)
| 19irene96 chapter 26 . 5/8
This chaptwr was AWESOME! Cant wait for the next one!
| sailormoonserenity99 chapter 26 . 5/7
I'm in love with this story, the character developments are wonderful.
| RocketKat123 chapter 26 . 5/6
Um...yeah, so that happened. I was caught very off guard with that one, friend.
Anyway, good chapter even though it shifts a bunch. I'm really glad that you didn't abandon this fic.
| xBBx chapter 26 . 5/6
Bruce said Natasha.. Heh. "Natasha" not Natasha. Nice.
But I'm like "oh no!" because I fear this will screw up their little dynamic now. Bruce is going to be all angsty and Toni's going be all angry.
On another note - Hooray! this isn't abandoned. I worried for a little while there but you came through! :D
Keep it coming!
| Dragones chapter 26 . 5/6
Loved this. Ah, drugs in the air. A brilliant start to anyone's day.
I hate avengers 2.
I mean, it's got a good plot and awesome action and funny moments, so normally I'd love it.
But they killed Jarvis.
And it really annoys me when people say "he's not dead, he got reborn as Vision"
Vision actually states that he ISN'T jarvis.
Jarvis is dead and gone. All that's left of Tony's oldest friend is some old data and a voice.
And imagine having to hear that voice and know it isn't the one you know and care about.
When ultron first destroys J, everyone is yelling at Tony, do they not realise he's effectively MOURNING?
And AGAIN when Vision starts wandering around and connects more with Thor than he does with Tony.
I like Vision.
But I also hate his guts.
I may also be a slight Tony/Jarvis shipper.
Don't ask, I don't know. I just am. J is my favourite character and they killed him.
Abd this was my essay on wht I am not counting Avengers 2 as canon.
| AnonymousStalkerFriend chapter 26 . 5/5
I've been day dreaming about this story since the last update so I almost screamed (from joy) when I saw the update!
Can't wait for the next update, and personally think you did great on this chapter! BYE-BYE
- ASF :D
| kuchiki977 chapter 25 . 4/3
That was beautiful. Keep on truckin.
| Syrlai chapter 25 . 3/12
you forgot making fun of Jean's horse face HA
got to be one of the best jokes in AoT aside from Levi's cleaning uniform. CLEANING IS JUSTICE!
| Fyby chapter 25 . 3/9
Yay, you're back! And more spider-man goodness on the horizon, I am pleased. Great chapter and I hope to see more soon. :O
| Guest chapter 25 . 3/6
this is so good!
| xBBx chapter 25 . 3/6
Keep going, keep going, keep going, keep going.
Is that sufficient nourishment for the brain juices to flow?
| AnonymousStalkerFriend chapter 25 . 3/5
Yay we got a new chapter! The Elements one-shots seem really interesting and I like what you're doing with Spidey. And Steve is freakin adorable when he's embarrassed! BYE-BYE
| Lia chapter 25 . 3/5
Yes, Marvel/DC, Toni/Bruce Wayne, Steve Jealous