Reviews for Ouran Highschool Host Club Read Fanfictions
LeanneP chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
I agree
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
She's ends up with tamaki at the end of the series so 't believe me? Watch it.
Me chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Heh this is funny! :)
PhantomhiveHost chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Hello I am going to try to make this review as positive as humanly possible, so /please/ try not to take offense. I know appreciate constructive criticism so I thought maybe you'd like some too.

1. Your story concept is awesome!
2. Grammar. I cannot put this positively. You need to write with a more coherent style, and homophones kind of seem to bother you :P
3. This seems very OOC for Haruhi (out of character).
4. You need to work on organization.

Please do PM me if you want help to fix these things, I love helping authors who need it! I can work with you to develop your story if you'd like, since I do beta read for OHSHC.

Good luck!