Reviews for Kansas Killer
Imstardancer12 chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
I agree with the last reviewer. The story was really good but it sounds more like a tornado and hurricanes don't randomly form over Kansas they form in the ocean. Tornados pick things up not hurricanes and they don't allow that much time trust me I have been through many tornados. Other then that it was a gret story
Guest chapter 5 . 10/3/2013
This was really good, but I've never heard of a storm acting like that. You said it was a hurricane? That doesn't quite seem to line up with the weather you described... I would think of a tornado, but then, tornadoes don't pause around farmhouses like that, and certainly don't give you enough time to run back and forth between a house and a storm shelter multiple times. Cars were hovering in the cloud? That was some weather event, there. Anyway, other than that, it was a good story. I liked the plot and I liked the writing. I loved the characterization. I just had some problems with the continuity of the whole thing.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
I really like this, your writing is very good. You should post your chapters one by one so that you get more reviews though.
JoTracy123 chapter 5 . 10/3/2013
Love it I really hope there is more well done x