|Reviews for How will this work: part one: Junior High 6th - 8th grade|
| TheRealSomeone akaSomeone chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
I will say this started off a little rocky, but it is picking up fast. Wasn't really interested in this, but now I am. The errors are small enough that I can understand what your staying, but they are there and they some seem to be careless mistakes like " I van help him"
| Kama43 chapter 3 . 3/21/2014
This is really good! You're spelling is a little out of whack but that's really it! The rest is great! :3
| TheRealSomeone akaSomeone chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
I like how Mike is a badass. I mean like Superbadass, almost unrealistically badass... other than that this is pretty interesting.