|Reviews for Control|
| Wolvenlights chapter 1 . 2/10
*instantaneous nose bleed* Oo Good God almighty! Hell Yea!
| Mrs.Moony86 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
This was delicious. Great work.
| me chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Hot! I love Thor being dominated by Jane.
| Gracie Riddle chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
I hope you continue this story
I really like it
| Rene Austen chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
I liked this very much! I enjoyed this depiction of the two of them, solidly in character and yet progressed much further in their relationship than we've seen in the films. This was steamy and fun but never crude or overdone, and so was just a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for writing!
| startraveller776 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Very cute. What I love about this: it's a *real* relationship. I tend to steer clear of sexy times in even my own pairing preferences because most writers are far too over the top. As a married (and happily satisfied) woman, my disbelief can only be extended so far before the story goes from steamy to cringe-worthy.
You, however, strike the perfect balance of description and leaving it to my imagination. (And thank you for not using a single cliched phrase!) I love the humor in there (because, let's face it, there's a lot of humor in real life love-making sessions).
This was, simply put, excellent. Classy, steamy, and fun. Two thumbs way up!