Reviews for Irritated
Fox chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Aww this was so cute! I agree with Hikari, Kei can be so kawaii at times. :3
peace-luv-fanfiction chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
"AWWWW! You sneeze like a KITTEN!" (a wink, wink)

LOVED this!
Animenger chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Awww...what a cute story
Alice Andi White chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
pinaygurl28 chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
aww thats so cute haha
Written Blood chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Although I overall enjoyed reading this fic, I do suggest you refrain from using phrases such as "sweat dropped" and "throbbing vein appeared on her forehead". "Sweat-dropped" is an absolute no-no.

Good job, though I recommend you try fixing such descriptions. (:

Written Blood
gracefully mai chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
This was the cutest thing I've read in a while! Good job!
AnimeGirl chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Awww this story is so cute! XD Please make more Kei X Hikari fanfics! I really want to know what are you going to do next! :)
louiseramz chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
cute Hikari... cute Kei!
wow! they are so perfect together.! :)
good start!
update soon! :)
AkiLife chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Aw shoot that was mad sweet!s
HawkFrost21 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Not bad :3