Reviews for History's most unpredictable Martial Artist
yukicrewger2 chapter 2 . 7/11
hmmm... is Naruto the son of Guan Yu perhaps?
bsdurler chapter 3 . 6/26
please update soon
Guest chapter 3 . 6/11
very good
reptoholic chapter 3 . 5/22
Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more.
reptoholic chapter 2 . 5/21
I like the story, I just wish he wasn't teachin Kenishi something that powerful...
reptoholic chapter 1 . 5/21
Love the story so far.
LOL chapter 3 . 4/16
oh shit didn't see that coming. I feel like this story I dead but hey,, this is the setup for something beautiful :D
GeneralFang2010 chapter 3 . 3/17
This is a good find. I've been scouring through crossovers trying to find something worth reading and you sir, have caught my attention. I, so far, and thoroughly enjoying your story. There's really nothing grammatically wrong that I've found, which shows that you take careful consideration while writing and actually re-read your work before posting it. Kudos to you for that. I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter you release and how the plot develops. Best of luck and I hope everything goes well for you.
kpsanimefan chapter 3 . 2/28
good start cant wait for more
Yukimori of the Cherokee chapter 3 . 1/24
Awesome work, please continue this story!
kvothe08 chapter 2 . 1/13
Also please make naruto take chikage as the other apprentice...and if possible get hinata into the story as his love interest (naruhina forever;-) )
kvothe08 chapter 3 . 1/13
Love this story...has so much potential with really well built back story/history for naruto...please update soon..
GR chapter 3 . 12/24/2014
What about the masters then?
GR chapter 3 . 12/15/2014
Like the ranking idea, wait for next chapter
The Richmaster chapter 3 . 12/1/2014
I'm enjoying this story so far, it has a lot of potential.
1. Especially the 'Bingo Book' idea; maybe in the next one it could go into further detail, such as; saying whether they are training under a master, if they have ranked in any martial arts tournaments, get a quote from them or maybe give them all a special nickname e.g. Berserker could be 'The Mad Beast', Odin the 'All-seeing and Thor 'The Thunderer'. or you could go for something insulting to really get at them ('Persona 4 Arena' has some really good insulting titles)
2. Given this Naruto's personality I imagine that he would utterly destroy random punks trying to make a name for themselves in one move but when confronted by someone who takes martial arts seriously would keep giving advice on how they could improve.
3. I hope that he gets he choose which disciple of Yami he trains, maybe Chikage, she seems like someone that Naruto would train, also seeing Sho Kano and Radin's reactions on being passed over
4. I suppose Kenichi will be at least a little different in personality-wise, probably a bit more proactive and Naruto would have at least tried to teach him to respect female fighters given his own past
5. And Miu will actually be fighting more; good, she often gets talked up but she doesn't actually have that many moments, it'll be good to see where you take this
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