Reviews for Heirs of the Founders |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That female goblin that was flirting with Harry, reminded me of Moneypenny and Bond! It played out so much like the old days of 007 movies! Now, finding out that "Aunt Nancy" is Narcissa Malfoy is a interesting twist. And Lucius: I'd pay attention to what the Grangers have to tell you, otherwise you might be in traction, if not worse! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Snape may be a headache, but he can read things in ways that Dummy can't or WON'T! And Harry and Hermione are earning respect from many members of Slytherin, which is a shock, considering the disdain Gryffindor and Slytherin have for one another. Draco is going to be in DEEP TROUBLE from his father, when Lucius gets done reading him the riot act! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like The Grangers, The Goblins, and certain other races are going to get along splendidly, if the wizarding community doesn't get its collective heads out of their rear ends and out of the ground! And Griphook's reaction to those rings is something that would shock ANYBODY with magical knowledge! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, an afternoon spent with the founders was very educational! And it gives Harry and Hermione something to consider for the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We thought Harry had a wild history; Hermione's parents had a WILD AND CRAZY ONE! And things are going to be up in the air for a while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's parents were right in not trusting Dumbledore! To that man, everyone is a game piece in his game against Voldemort for "The Greater Good" in which he comes out on top! Meeting Salazar Slytherin? Now THIS is a msjor shock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh trust me Hermione, with what Harry did, you ARE Nobility, as far as the Goblins, and in time, the Wizengamot are concerned you WILL be recognized as such! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When the Goblins speak of a Human woman the way they speak of Lily, that is HIGH PAISE! Goblins do not normally speak that way of Wizards, let alone Muggleborns. And Draco, writing to your father is going to make you APOLOGIZE to Potter and Hermione! Your father my be arrogant, but even HE knowa what the Filal Protectum means! Snape knows, and it SCARED him! |
![]() ![]() Quote "-for all she didn't like Divinity-" unquote. DIVINITY? Are you fucking insane? "-for all she didn't like DIVINATION-" would be appropriate to the context. Divinity? For God's sake, buy a bloody dictionary. Even a grade school level one should have provide a suitable explanation of that stupidity. Ciao. |
![]() ![]() AAARRRGGGHHH! NO! Just NO! I can't take any more of your ridiculous fake words and grotesque mis-spellings. Please invest in a decent quality English dictionary. I recommend Chambers 21st Century or Oxford English dictionaries. Look up the words WEARY and SUITE. They do not mean what you seem to believe they do. What you should be using are WARY and SUIT. E.G. what you're using refers to a SUITE OF ROOMS, such as a hotel's Honeymoon Suite, or a SUITE OF FURNITURE, such as a dining room suite. Also the act of tutoring is TUTELAGE, not your made up nonsense. E.G. Harry Potter underwent TUTELAGE in Gringotts, being tutored in all he needed to know. Um, there's a rake of other minor corruptions but those are three egregious cock-ups that have been repeated far too often to bear. Please do a bulk "Find & Replace" to fix your otherwise worthy effort. Ciao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! can't wait to see what happens next! hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very original and fun read for a story. Very entertaining with godd belly laughs provided. Brilliant naming of the house elves. Brilliant. Thanks for the great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the story and chapter so far please update when you get a chance to thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the story and chapter so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione’s got the smartest witch label on the 1st day of school. |