Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Overall nice start. The flashback formatting is a real negative. It is really hard to read all the dialog embedded in single paragraphs like that. Really should have one paragraph/line per speaker. Otherwise it get so confusing. Especially when you take into account it is not uncommon to forget a parentheses to open/close dialog so it can seem like the same person is still speaking when the speaker has changed, or vice versa.

Interesting story, one small comment though: It's Heisenberg, not Hiesenberg. And Heisenberg is mainly known for his uncertainty principle, wave mechanics of matter was theorised by de Broglie and Shrödinger.

very interesting story. cant wait for more

excellent start to your story

I like the chapter

Occasionally, both Harry and Hermione seem to be frighteningly proper in a very 'British' sort of way, well done. Spot on.

First to help I hope the FF profile of Kalen Darkmoon has a good write up on Dumbledore who is manipulative
Now the review
This is a good story start, the use of dreams (which I have not seen before in HP FF well done) and the way the goblins are portrayed, is skillfully crafted writing, the chapters flow into one another and by doing so hold the reader interest, I look forward to see where you will take this story as it has a fresh feel to it as it takes the well known story hook and plot ideas and starts to play the out in a new way add new ideas to the mix keep work on this and I for one hope that it will become something very special.l