|Reviews for Second Chances|
| arsalan.rex chapter 1 . 7/16
your summary is... confusing to say the least...
Kushina is young enough to be madara's great granddaughter. madara is same age as hashirama, tsunade is hashirama's granddaughter n Kushina is a generation younger than tsunade.
so it doesn't makes any sense when you say "Naruto is in the body of child madara in a time when Kushina is young"...
| corrinlone77 chapter 8 . 5/9
| Phoenixcatch7 chapter 1 . 3/29
I've read the full story, and I have to say, while the idea is awesome and very unique, the plot, character development and overall writing style leaves much to be desired. Far too informal, with unrealistic characters, poor grammar and bad punctuation. An honestly incredible idea, though.
| Wongjunkit chapter 2 . 12/11/2017
Raman is the singular of Ramen...
Just kidding xD
| mckertis chapter 2 . 12/8/2017
What is up with all these stupidly ridiculous typos ? The fuck is "raman" ?
| ethan.lukkar chapter 8 . 10/9/2017
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/5/2017
Dear writer please make more chapter
| PrintedSnail11 chapter 8 . 7/28/2017
Hey man decent story so far i hope youll try to continue.
| 707 Cx chapter 8 . 6/24/2017
didn't expect naruto to become a genin teacher but that is a good idea. I hope you'll make Naruto meet Sarutobi's students. (Jr,Tsu,Or)
| AnAddictedReader chapter 3 . 5/12/2017
Was wondering what you meant with stoke then realized you were mispelling stoic. Also, it feels like I'm rereading another similar story but it at least was better grammar-wise.
| malikmi95 chapter 8 . 4/25/2017
how naruto didn't know the reibi? and did he got mokuton from madara's body?
| SpencerDorman chapter 3 . 4/23/2017
I had thought that Kagami was the same Kagami as the one from canon, who was also the ancestor of Shisui, but canon Kagami is not Mikoto's father. Maybe you have made it so that it all fits together, possibly so that one of Shisui's parents is the child of Kagami and the sibling of Mikoto, which would mean that Itachi and Shisui were actually cousins, or maybe this is a different Kagami, but that's all up to you.
| SpencerDorman chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
Don't know if you were planning on it, but Naruto should have the Rinnegan. If not now, then eventually. One of the ways to awaken the legendary dōjutsu is to combine the chakra of the reincarnations of Asura and Indra Ōtsutsuki, and I figure that combining the spirit of Naruto (the reincarnation of Asura) with the body of Madara (the reincarnation of Indra) effectively fills that requirement. The body that Naruto is in is before Madara transplanted Hashirama's cells into himself, so the Rinnegan must be acquired in a different way than that. Then again, Madara didn't have the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan at the age that Naruto in Madara's body has it, so maybe that won't matter. If Naruto has the EMS eyes that required an older Madara to have his brother's eyes transplanted into himself, then maybe Naruto will have both the Rinnegan and Mokuton that required an even older Madara to transplant Hashirama's cells into himself. Well, the Rinnegan is pretty much a certainty given the multiple reasons that Naruto should have it, but if Naruto has the EMS then he should also have the Mokuton.
| Wow chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
I mean wow, you made all the males, except our lord and savior naruto, a moron. Honestly, I am here for smut, I do not expect amazing wrighting.
| DNA2337 chapter 8 . 3/5/2017
Please continue the story