Reviews for When I Think About You
ec-writes chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
Very interesting characterization of Twenty-Three. I like it quite a lot.
The little conversation between him and the homunculus is rather ominous, even though I'm not sure if you meant it to be. His ability to get into the slave's head and taunt him resembles, to me, how Hohenheim berates himself and calls himself a monster. Perhaps those little moments helped catalyze his poor self image? Aside from the awful incident in Xerxes, I mean. Lol.

Great job! :)