|Reviews for Goblin Spies and Unexpected Visitors|
| friendrat chapter 63 . 21h
So, I've read most of this story in the past 2 days, but I wasn't logged in, so I didn't comment. But I thought I'd say something about the phone thing...
I don't know if it's a cultural difference or of it's just been a long time since you saw an old phone, but (on the American phones at least) the alphabet actually starts on 2.
I liked (or loved to hate) Jaed. I would have liked more backstory on him (kind of like your plan to make Sarah seem less spoiled by showing her relationship with her parents). Maybe a oneshot/short story, starting before the death of his brother, showing what he went through, why (and how) he turned to dark magic, and maybe a small amount of regret when he became friends with Sarah? Just a thought.
You were decently subtle with Jaed, but I knew he was immortal the first time he showed up. I also figured out that he was trying to get to Jareth through Sarah by his second or third appearance (he really was a good actor, not talking notice of the goblins... on that note, why didn't they report to Jareth that Sarah was hanging out with a *shiny*person?), and figured out he was related to Onix before the ball, and that he'd show up there. But I didn't think his character was overly obvious (except the Edward Cullen line when she met him...), I just follow plot threads pretty well.
Anyway, the story over all had been awesome!
| Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 52 . 7/24
Trouble with a capital "T"
And that rhymes with "P" and that stands for Plot…
| Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 31 . 7/24
Oh dear, easter eggs with chickens hiding inside? That's gonna ruin hardboiled eggs for me for a while, thank you for that. For my revenge i'll tell you the story of a steak dinner I almost had.
I was at dinner with my parents one vacation and I ordered a steak. When it came out and I cut into it, it bled and I asked, because I watch a few crime scene tv shows, why it was that when you cut into steak it bled but when you cut into a dead body it didn't. And my dad said something, I'm not even sure what anymore, and I started laughing so hard I was crying and the waiter came by and asked if I'd gotten pepper in my eye, which only made my laughing fit worse. Sent the steak back to be cooked some more, it came back, no longer oozing, but by that time I couldn't even look at it straight let alone eat it. I didn't have much for dinner that night.
| Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 16 . 7/24
His reaction to coffee! Omg! I, myself, am Not a coffee drinker. It has to be one of those frozen ice blended mocha things that are loaded with sugar and calories with a teaspoon's worth of coffee in it before it is enjoyable. My dad has tried all kinds of things, sugar, hot chocolate, some weird vanilla packet thing and given me a spoonful to taste and each time I've looked at it dubiously and then upon tasting it decide that I do not like coffee. I'm more of a tea person. By contrast my grandmother used to take her coffee, decaf with nothing added, in a thermos and drank it out of a straw. I can't remember a day when she didn't have that orange thermos within easy reach.
| Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 15 . 7/24
Can I hug him? He's adorable!
| Cherry Blossom Angel 18 chapter 8 . 7/24
First, the story is Fantastic! Second, upon reading your author's note about the edible glitter, I went and I looked up what exactly edible glitter is, as I've never heard of it. I'm now going to have to host a Labyrinth party with glittered edibles, it has to be done! :)
| DemonDragon000 chapter 28 . 7/19
I think you and I have the same muse...never shows up unless you have a million things you should be doing instead of writing.
| AliceXxX chapter 67 . 7/19
I loved it!
Great grammar and writing style.
Devine plot line!
And let's face it, if it mentions King Jareth or Sarah Williams (I'm in love with them both, that was an odd discovery for me cx) I'm completely enthralled by it!
I really hope you have something up for the wedding or the pregnancy or something like that! As a matter of fact, I'm going to go look now!
| Guest chapter 67 . 7/15
I absolutely loved your story. Thank you.
| Autumn chapter 45 . 7/15
I am loving this story! I started reading it this morning and sat through almost 40 chapters before deciding almost 10 hours later I should probably do something productive - didn't last long till I was back reading it! Loved hungover Sarah and literally laughed out loud at Ythan pretending to notice something interesting outside the window. Can't wait to see how the rest of the story goes!
| PaperGirlInAPaperTown chapter 67 . 7/12
I actually have no words, this entire fic was absolutely incredible, I got chills so many times (I hope you know how talented you are).
Given that this was two years in the making, it was really interesting to see not just the differences in your writing, but the character development which, by the way, was the best I've seen on this site so far!
I can't put into words how impressed I was, so I'm just going to go read it again.
| nozomiwinter chapter 60 . 6/27
i would never think that there would be part a part with linda in it.
| tlomax chapter 67 . 6/26
I love this story and couldn't have asked for a better ending, it made me smile! You had the characters on point throughout and made me feel like I was Sarah. You have a talent for writing and must definately take it somewhere!
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/21
That is so cute. Weekly ration of kisses. I'm sitting here reading this fic and giggling like an idiot I hope you're happy
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/15
I am enjoying this very much. I love sarah from a Brits point of view. I like the goblins, messy and clumsy they may be but with good hearts. I'm enjoying jareth being kept on his toes! I started reading a little bit ago and it's pretty much a garantee I'll spend the rest of my day finishing your story! Thanks for the entertaining read love!