Nice story!

I read you story. I enjoy it, from the beginning to the end

I just finished reading this entire fic and I wanted to tell you that I loved it! Thank you for persevering through everything going on at the time and finishing it. I've favorited it and it is one that I will come back to again.

You included PERN in the library! Thank you!

Aww!

this was a good story until this stupidity came up

sadly all too many writers get way too ambitious and think they are much better than they are

That was amazing! I love how she hates peaches! Lol
It was really great, slow build up, but I couldn't put it down.

Lol this is the third time I've read this fic and it never ceases to bring me an insane amount of much-needed joy. What a gift you've given the internet in this story. ️️️

I’ve been enjoying your story and Lixxie, LL STARLING, IS A CLOSE PERSONAL FRIEND..

The whole Jaed thing and running another stupid labyrinth and stupid riddles was
JUST
MORONIC

This would have been a much better story if you had just stuck with the mistakes Jareth kept making

But in the end like all other gutless authors you chickened out

It shook me a few days (children/husband/shed kitten/relatives staying all giving me very little reading time), but I finally and sadly finished it. It has been on my list for a while and I was daunted by how many chapters there were but I am so glad I finally read it. I loved it. Loved your writing style and the plot. The romance and how Sarah wasn't a wilting flower and stood up for herself. I don't see her as spoilt, but rather self determined.

Haha jareth is totally bisexual in my headcanon. So he wouldn't be totally repulsed excepting of course that he is loyal to sarah.

Good chapter. Loved the imagery of the stone woman.

"Next time I will listen to you, sprog."

*sprog talks*

*Sarah blatantly does the opposite*

I'm all for Sarah occasionally needing help. And vice versa. Equal partnerships and all that. I'm also a huge advocate for destroying gender norms and stereotypes. I'm not hugely anti- damsel in distress but I'm not hugely pro it being overused either. I can't change a tyre but I'm the one who mows the lawns. People should work to their strengths and not what society deems appropriate based on gender or sex.

Saying all that there is something definitely sexy about a vengeful angry jareth.

Loving this so much. Lapping up the angst.