Oh, this is just so glittery and girly and kissy and fluffy! And funny. My wee little Labyrinthian heart is breaking at the thought of writer's block and no updates for a while, though...what must we do to help you, precious? Shall we comfort you with apples, or perhaps champagne truffles, and ply you with raspberry hot cocoa? Seriously, though I don't usually get writer's block per se (it's not like measles), there are times when the plot stalls and I just don't feel like writing. So what I do then is, I background. I research, or play with plotlines, or draw maps, or fool around with names. In short, I kind of trick myself into writing. So then when I do go back to the story or novel or whatever, the pump is primed and I just jump right into it like a goblin into a snowbank. Well, good luck to you and I hope we see you again soon because this is just my favorite story of all. And thank you.

Jareth cheating in a duel against James Blunt - spin off material!
I do love Sarah's definition of a boyfriend, highly entertaining as always!

Sorry about your writer's block. :(. My old creative writing teacher made us write out lists. Said it sparked the creative juices. She also said to stop writing in the middle of a scentence so it could be picked up later. I find that one didn't work so well. Good Luck!

well, now i want authentic creme brulee... four months pregnant here, and you bring tasty desserts into the story! craving sugary desserts and more story please! thanks for the goblins too. They're the best :)

Of course they have to fight. I love how the goblins try and patch things together, they are so cute.

Okay.
So I just finished reading it all, in one go - as predicted.
Sorry that's not entirely true, I did stop to make a cup of tea. But only because I was salivating so heavily over your Jareth that my body's water mass index was seriously depleted.
Your Jareth is delightfully, playfully, wicked. He has just the right mix of maliciousness and tenderness to make him completely endearing (to me anyway, I'm a sucker for your spin on him).
I really like your Sarah too, she's just as proud, stubborn, fearless and utterly smitten as a good Sarah should be.
I especially enjoyed this chapter, the reality of a fight over nothing, even when they know it's wrong, even when they're aware of that wrongness as the argument is occurring, it's so very real. We've all had that moment of contrariness we know we'll regret - many feels - your portrayal of the dynamics of their relationship and the struggle for balance between their differences is enchanting.
Your goblins and hand down some of the most adorable ever, even I wanted those dead flowers. If Sprog ever needs a sitter I'm your gal.
I'm seriously conflicted between enjoying your Beta efforts and telling you to IGNORE ME COMPLETELY and post more of this instead (I may be stoned to death for holding up your plot).
Seriously excellent stuff, can't wait for the next chapter. XD

I really, REALLY want some tea making goblins

Nice Hoggle, Ludo and Sir Didymus - I think it's always a struggle to reintroduce them to an adult Sarah. Well done, I think your Hoggle was suitably gruff and sweet, very true to canon.

I'll just wait for this hormonal tide to subside before I push on...

"I just dream about you naked once in awhile. Crap I really hope he can't read minds."
Can't... remember... how... to... breathe...

... Your confusion about poet's shirts... that sounds vaguely familiar... eerie - mind twins?

So you can just piss off *dies*
English Sarah, you are my hero!

This couple. Always having ridiculous arguments. But the chapter is really good! I think when Sarah kind of opened up to Jareth about not being wanted was great. And glitter cupcakes! Yayyy!

Ahhhhhh how do you do it? I mean write so good -_- such imagery lolol _ I really like how you gave a specific description in this chapter. Ya I got hungry too haha and yaaa I had a rather fluffy glitter free Christmas ;D please update pweaaaaase

YES! Hahaha! Thank you! Goblins again! I simply love them especially when Sarah is sobbing and complaining all the time while she is supposed to be the luckiest person in the wor... eh...Underground? Oh no, what about James Blunt next time? Is she going to fall in love with him or are the goblins doing some kind of Karaoke show howling his songs? I defintily stay tuned :-) Thank you so much, have a great time until next time, N.